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Sirkit-In a Rush (feedback 4 feedback)

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Re: Sirkit-In a Rush (feedback 4 feedback)

Post by THIZFACE » Thu Jul 07, 2011 8:03 pm

In a rush is sooooooo dope. Your bass sounds are fucking perfect lol. I really can't think of anything to tell you that you aren't already doing, so my advice is keep up the good work.

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Re: Sirkit-In a Rush (feedback 4 feedback)

Post by davwuh » Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:02 pm

pretty awesome tune man, just when i thought it was getting a bit repetitive the samples came in and got me hyped again, really nice
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Re: Sirkit-In a Rush (feedback 4 feedback)

Post by Colton813 » Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:13 pm

Cool man. Thanks!

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Re: Sirkit-In a Rush (feedback 4 feedback)

Post by ZimmermanStudios » Thu Jul 07, 2011 11:05 pm

Great arrangement, flows really well. I think the main synth sound is a little overcompressed, and the other samples in the bassline slightly too loud. Full mix sounds like maybe 2-3dB too crushed. Cool sounds, but they sound like they're fighting each other too hard.

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Re: Sirkit-In a Rush (feedback 4 feedback)

Post by AirRake » Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:52 pm

nice track dude, drums are sounding real nice. The bass line started to get a little repetitive with the same sound for me but honestly thats just a preference, good stuff man.

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Re: Sirkit-In a Rush (feedback 4 feedback)

Post by Colton813 » Fri Jul 08, 2011 5:04 pm

Thanks man!

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Re: Sirkit-In a Rush (feedback 4 feedback)

Post by Ponch » Sun Jul 10, 2011 10:01 pm

Very cool tune man! I love the energy it has, it flows forward spitting out heavy beats very nicely! If I had anything negative to say it would be work with the levels a bit of some of the synths, seems too loud one moment then too faded another.... but thats a very small imperfection.... keep up the good work!

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Re: Sirkit-In a Rush (feedback 4 feedback)

Post by Colton813 » Sun Jul 10, 2011 10:15 pm

Thanks man!

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Post by SlumCity » Sun Jul 10, 2011 10:26 pm

checked a few of the soundcloud tracks out , not bad at all keep building. i think you should strive to sound a bit more natural but a bit dirtier.. its all very clean and mechanical , ... think .. filth juxtaposed on simple catchy beauty . ..

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Re: Sirkit-In a Rush (feedback 4 feedback)

Post by ElSonido » Mon Jul 11, 2011 1:44 am

Big kick.

Very picky, and just a preference thing, have you tried using a bit of parallel compression on the snare? It could get the trail off to sound a bit more natural and have a bigger sound in the track.

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To get the kick to snap through during the sections with all the action, have you sidechained the synth elements? A quick duck on the kick can make a lot of difference.

The drum switch is a fantastic addition. Keeps the track fresh. The hats in the percussion are also fantastic. Perfect level, perfect feel.

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Re: Sirkit-In a Rush (feedback 4 feedback)

Post by Colton813 » Mon Jul 11, 2011 1:56 am

Thanks man. Will fer sure use that advice.

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Re: Sirkit-In a Rush (feedback 4 feedback)

Post by FluidMoShun » Mon Jul 11, 2011 5:29 am

DSF makes some of the best dubstep around. Tunes like this are why I'm here, its original and really interesting. Had to play it at low vol cause I'm living with people who are sleeping right now, but I'm gunna blast this tomorrow for sure.

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Re: Sirkit-In a Rush (feedback 4 feedback)

Post by paradigm001 » Mon Jul 11, 2011 5:44 am

everything sounds nice the only thing that some one mentioned was the repetition of the bass in the beg, I agree but its still a solid track
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Re: Sirkit-In a Rush (feedback 4 feedback)

Post by thekeeftheef » Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:38 am

In a rush is sick, not much else to say lol, nice work !

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Re: Sirkit-In a Rush (feedback 4 feedback)

Post by Colton813 » Mon Jul 11, 2011 8:27 am

Thanks you guys!

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Re: Sirkit-In a Rush (feedback 4 feedback)

Post by mars » Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:07 pm

NICE track! didn't expect that at ALL!
I'd say the main synth needs to stand out just a little bit more. the warpy stuff in the background sounds a little muffled in my opinion. i'm not 100% sold on the snare, maybe add a short clap in there to make it snappier. the switch-ups u do between synths are nice, i think u should keep the new synths going for longer instead of going back to the first synth, it adds to the track progression and keeps ppl listening. last but not least, i would add more sweeps and incidentals throughout the track to help with progression.
Sorry I went all out, but I'm reaaaally liking the track, and I would definitely drop this in a set. I love the ideas u have here and it would work sooo well if it was tweaked just a little bit more. And the drum switch-up on the 2nd drop is HUGE! BIGGGG UP! nice track, and i hope u don't take any of my advice the wrong way. I'm looking forward to hearing more tunes from u! :D

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Re: Sirkit-In a Rush (feedback 4 feedback)

Post by Colton813 » Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:25 pm

Cool man, thanks. I need to get a premium account so I can just update them without taking them down and re-uploading. I love constructive criticism, no worries. Check out the new one that i just finished up. http://soundcloud.com/sirkit-dubstep/child-proof-clip

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