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Jackknife - You Shall Not Pass! - Dubstep (FB/320)

Post by Jackknife » Sat Dec 10, 2011 9:57 am

New track, Free 320, let me know what you think!

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Re: Jackknife - You Shall Not Pass! - Dubstep (FB/320)

Post by swatdojo » Sat Dec 10, 2011 3:54 pm

very nice! i really like the second build/drop at 2:20. love that style of glitch samples for rythm. only suggestion would be to push some of the levels on a few of the wobbles/growls/synths in there cause youve got a few db of headroom that you can fill up with extra sound, the kicks sound good and will punch through nicely with a little extra fast compression.
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Post by Jackknife » Sun Dec 11, 2011 12:35 am

Thank you for the feedback, I'll take a crack at that right now! :4:
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Post by Jackknife » Sun Dec 11, 2011 7:14 pm

Bump, anyone else got some thoughts?
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Re: Jackknife - You Shall Not Pass! - Dubstep (FB/320)

Post by WeBang » Sun Dec 11, 2011 9:08 pm

Def not bad at all......maybe just a bit more beefing up in the master. Good wobble and melody work. like the vocal chops
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Re: Jackknife - You Shall Not Pass! - Dubstep (FB/320)

Post by itsdeadpool » Sun Dec 11, 2011 9:58 pm

nice work man, i agree with We Bang; needs a little more beef, a little mastering would help
really like the melody and background synth, well done overall!
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Re: Jackknife - You Shall Not Pass! - Dubstep (FB/320)

Post by DiscoJews » Mon Dec 12, 2011 10:27 pm

nice track!:)
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Post by Jackknife » Tue Dec 13, 2011 12:15 am

Thank you all very much, I really appreciate the feedback! I'll update the fix here and see if it sounds better.
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Post by DJ Crackle » Tue Dec 13, 2011 12:05 pm

sounds fly, enjoy that lead synth a lot
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Post by Jackknife » Tue Dec 13, 2011 1:25 pm

Thank you dude!
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Re: Jackknife - You Shall Not Pass! - Dubstep (FB/320)

Post by Jackknife » Wed Dec 14, 2011 12:31 am

one last bump for a dying thread?
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Post by Kronik Dub Toker » Wed Dec 14, 2011 5:47 pm

Jackknife wrote:New track, Free 320, let me know what you think!

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nice shit.
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Re: Jackknife - You Shall Not Pass! - Dubstep (FB/320)

Post by ReachZenith » Wed Dec 14, 2011 6:38 pm

Sounded good yesterday, and still does! Keep it up!
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Re: Jackknife - You Shall Not Pass! - Dubstep (FB/320)

Post by Jackknife » Wed Dec 14, 2011 10:58 pm

hahaha thanks all for the wonderful feedback, mus be doing somthing right, this is my first feedback page gone beyond 2-3 posts :P
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