Feedback would be appreciated guys, im new to production, am I on the right track?

http://soundcloud.com/dntknw

http://www.mediafire.com/?20myn4nyf2k

All feedback appreciated (good or bad) just seeing if im on the right track.

Some reason it wont let me put my souncloud player on here, have a couple of tunes online, all feedback welcome (postive or negative, need to know if im on the right track!)
http://soundcloud.com/dntknw

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http://www.mediafire.com/?itz0q0mtgjz

Made this yesterday, be good to see if im on the right track or if its rubbish, constructive criticism welcome!

@ DNT KNW

almost didnt listen mate, dont think many people will, if they have to dl a tune, get a soundcloud = more plays :wink:

the tune is pretty good, deep feel, nice beats, is there a bassline? ( shit laptop speakers sorry)

add a few things, (bass, fx, find a sample, or whatever you think ...

If its on there Scuba's mix for XLR8R is good, if its not there can get it on their website/itunes

http://www.mediafire.com/?0iuwlhn2oyu

Might be like 90% finished, ish, can someone let me know if its ok?

syncopatedbeats wrote:still waiting on the DJ Kicks...

I still cant believe how long that's been listed on Amazon, it doesnt even exist!

http://www.mediafire.com/?qyzc02wzzmq

Feedback would really be appreciated guys, this is my first attempt at production!