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@lowphat owl :) love the tribal feel ...great intro. honestly was exspecting a big drop. sub bass REAL nice. you need some work in the drum track change it up. the "crashes" dont sound right. over all great start id fix up the drum track and had some type of melody line and a pad in there ...

@influx not really my style but its very good! you should fattn up that main lead. then towards the end just make that lead go insane. have 2 synths one an oct higher ... not really feeling that snare. rverb little layer over all fatter sounding. oh and needs more bassss. @Ematyael Thanks man much a...

@lowphat thanks man appreciate it. agree with the snare now that i hear it. as for the colab...i noticed this today i thought it was just my headphones, but playing through my speakers its there aswell..not sure how they got like that..but good ear. thanks man! as for your tune- very old school feel...

Im just re posting my songs i gave 6 feedbacks and received one. ill return feedback for feedback thank you.

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@Mannyyyyy what song where you talking about i posted 2 ...yours- like the sample nice intro man like the drop. snare sounds a little dry for my taste needs a little more punch other than that very good start man.

@Ascian -enjoy the samples , like the over all tune. could push that bass a little more but very good work on the mixdown. @atticuh amazing piano. piano need to be in the drop. slow that bit all down. then it will come together @Malleus love that wobble sound. very nice groove to it. nice change ups...

@sera1 " Nice Intro. For me there needs to be more action. You could make up a great build-up, out of this intro." have to agree. reason why i posted it up here, see if anyone has suggestions. kind of got writers block atm. for your tune like the synths, excellent build. love the breathing...

@projekt 1stly glad to see someone doing some post/garage slightly the direction im headed.. "Hold On" im diggn the over all beat, like the vocal samples. this could use some more atmosphere to bring it all in. the bit at 2.14 then where it stops.. yes.*nods* "Changes" like this ...

ive giving my fair share of feedback for this track but i wont stop just busy atm just had time drop off what i added thanks to all those for the feedback

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@bugsky like your atmosphere. those hats are realll nice love your snare work but i feel it could have more punch to it. love that "whistley" sound that sound would go great in my tune. you might want a break where it all just settles down leaves you hanging out in space then sucks you bac...

@Specimen-Yarp the main melody has some distortion effect *muddy* if you will the synth at 1:22 is distorted like i said not sure if its meant to be like that.. to my ears its a little rough around the edges but thats me. also a pinch of reverb may give it some more depth. @ infestedpasta got that n...

@paravrais thanks for the feedback work is being done now. as for your tune, love the intro very chilled. i have no complaints other than the sound of that poor brass trying to yell out. dont change the line but perhaps pep it up? makes it a bit more crisp... @ninthy4 thanks for the feed back lookin...

@Turnipish Thoughts- i really like this man good job. Im going to have to agree with miyan. i think you should change up that hihat pattern up a bit @miyan- like the use of the reverse. try adding some throaty pads then perhaps a another ambient sound then change up the reverse sample. i hope that h...

So far ive got alot of great feedback but sooo much mixed opinions, many love/hate - the kick, final results made it more dry. I added the synth that plays at 0:13 to the very start. the birds also faintly come in and out from the start. the drop is the same. i may or may not changed the "whoa&...

@JBE loven this intro man. damn just gets better..truthfully it satisfies my ears. not saying it needs it but just go through and give it that fine tuning to how you like it. great job! @Glue Reed creative man nice try and smooth out your transitions a little more. i almost picked on that rimhit in ...

Kidstrange: Drums create a SICK atmosphere. That wob though, genuinely the best Ive heard in ages. Really Caspa ish. How did you make it? My only crit is the mixdown. Constructively, its piss poor mate. Crackles, distortions, muddyness. Turn everything down!!! Its ruining a wonderful composition. t...

@Cheeky great idea creative sounds. slightly repeating and defiantly needs some filling up to do. the beat/sound of the percussion need no change.. @DreamThief much much better! i love how you can still hear the water running. imho i like it how it is but id have to say that little one note "st...

@710 this tracks a talker but well put together not really feeling the intro..i dooo enjoy the sweep around 2:00 suggestions would be to add some other snyths. perhaps a little break down either speed it up or slow it down..if you get what im saying. Yeah, the intro's kinda thrown in. I'm not sure ...

I guess shortening would do. It didn't sound bad so I shouldn't of said delete it. I agree that the songs synth starts out very plain. I need to fix that. What do you mean by pitching it? I'm also thinking of shortening. sorry for the lack of detail, the whole song was good but rather plain it just...