:/ if I knew how to remove the post I would... Sorry. So, for future reference, where would you recommend posting requests like this to? I wasn't sure if it was the September work in progress stuff, since it's October, lol. Guess that was stupid.

I'm pretty new here, so I hope I'm putting this in the right place.

I'd like some help. I know my shit isn't very good, but I just don't know what I need to make it better. Could someone tell me what I'm missing, or need to change? I feel like I've got a pretty good start. A friend of mine said ...

Very nice! While are people are saying the first track is repetitive, I find it really chill-out. Cool stuff.

I'd suggest using the "soundgoodizer" effect in the master track. It's kinda weird, but it seems to make all my sounds pop out a bit more, if that makes sense. You can also try a "Fruity Bass Boost" on your bass tracks in the mixer. Give that a shot. I hope it helps.