@ Dublicks That intro is a bit random tbh. Notes also sound way off the beat. Seems like you just took some cool sounding loops and sounds and blended them together. Can't really comment much considering I'm feeling you're pretty new to producing. Read up some thread around here, experiment a bit ...
nonXero - nice man like the main synth works well
DannyDubstep- like the tune alot apart from the half pace bit, mayb boost low end slighty on ur bass
mr_static- got potential would like to here a longer ver