not mixed down yet, i think it sounds cluttered and im not sure about the intro and vocal sample. All done in h-phones so prob in a bit of a mess still. Take a listen and give me some constructive feedback please....as im sick to death of listening to it!! :u:

http://soundcloud.com/cynical ...

Cheers man. It still needs work like, but the more i listen to it the more i like the vocals. Not sure whether to change the tune to fit the vocals or, like you suggest, keep the vocals in the intro/outro.

Thanx for the feedback

Yet another w.i.p. My version of a classic tune. Not entirely sure if the vocal works or not i know its a big diversion from the original track style......dont wanna butcher the original :) its not mixed or mastered in any way yet. leave a comment.
http://soundcloud.com/cynical-outlook/destiny ...

Thanks man ill get on the case

I know it needs a bit more variation but otherwise gimme some feedback please......ive listened to it that much im sick of it!! lol Soundcloud