yeah just some weird stuff I have been working on, here you go
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Aaha best feedback ever! If all else goes wrong at least I can commission carnival tunes. Yeah this is an early version which I hadn't put the sub-bass in, needed to EQ a lot of the other synths first as they were hogging up all the space. Got the sub bass on now sounds beefy :) made a quite a few ...

@Olux yeah I know what you mean about the intro, though I consider it another part entirely rather than an intro as such, don't have the heart to cut it! I missed out a little piano line when the track changes which kinda makes it glue together, oh well though. Thanks for the feedback!

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@Alt Fire, not sure about this one, the bass sounds really dark in parts (good!) but it seems to be clashing with a totaly major high melody in the background?

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@Lorken, hope i dont sound like a tnuc here, though I probably will, no offense intended! But there really isn't anything to comment on here, its just 30seconds of drums? Is this a mistake link? Anyway.... its cool your play starcraft! aha.

@nibzdub really like those eq drums hits and the rhythm when the drop kicks in. Feel like the tune loses its pace a bit when you start too mix the sounds up a bit but if you get some bigger sounds it will sound huge! awesome!

@kushhmane riff feels kinda cheesy at the start but when those synths ...

@oprs - yeah i get you, will get working on that, cheers. I am loving this track though, looking forward to hearing more of it.

@nibzdub - no problem looking forward to hearing it !

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really like how this track started out, bassline sounds great, but as it goes on it feels like there's something, missing, perhaps a high/mid melody of some kind?

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really like this, some nice sounds and synths in there, I feel the it gets a bit repetitive at the start though ...