http://soundcloud.com/renin/starry-eyed-dubstep-remix

I know it has been done before, but I really dislike the popular remixes I've heard. I decided to make something more my style.
I'm really new to dubstep still, so I have a lot to learn. Leave some C&C and help me improve!

Please leave a ...

Absolutely
I'm whipping up something new right now that's less muddy.

This is why I registered here! I don't get feedback like this on other forums. Well that's awesome that you don't think it's bad for a first try, and I'd have to agree with you that the chorus has a horrible drippy crappiness to it.
I now have a formant filter and a bitcrusher, which I didn't have ...

I've lurked this forum previously, but have never registered. I registered today to see if I could get some feedback on what is my first dubstep attempt. I go by the artist name, "Renin". Please, don't go easy on me. I can take harsh criticism 8)

Anyways, I named it "Static", since that's more ...