Nice Intro. Not bad for half a year experience in producing. Use a little bit more of EQ for the single sounds to fit them more in the mix. And don't overuse compression/limiting too much, it sounds a little bit overdriven.

Sorry, this is not my first tune . I meant it is my first tune/posting in this forum.
Thanks for your feedback, I will return the favor

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