New track I've been working on lately. :)

http://soundcloud.com/papirflyet/papirfly-clouds

I appreciate honesty, no need to go easy on me. Open to all ideas and suggestions, I'm here mainly to improve as a producer so feel free to be brutally honest if there's something about the track that's ...

I've uploaded a new and improved version of the track, pretty much reworked the entire song and added a bunch of stuff based on feedback I've been getting.

Soundcloud

Again, hugs and kisses to everyone who listens. Thanks.

Thanks alot, yeah it's 125bpm. I definitely understand what you mean by the wobble sounding like a synth, having a hard time making a rich bass without it drowning out all other sounds.

And yes, I'm on Live suite, thanks alot for the kind words.

Hi everyone, been lurking for a while. Been working on this track for a couple of days now, finally feeling comfortable with ableton.
Hugs and kisses to everyone who gives me feedback, I'm here to learn so I would appreciate it if you're 100% honest. :)

http://soundcloud.com/papirflyet/takedown ...