Make this song fit that description. What does it need?

Soundcloud

Soundcloud

You should smoke.

So muddy its oozing out of my headphones. Good Build ups and breakdowns though.

Soundcloud

I kind of like the "happiness" but i agree, mix this bag up. Vocals are being buried alive. Otherwise: good tune.

A Little Monotonus Doncha Think? I like the orchestral hit though.

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I appreciate the feedback. I am using ableton with only a midi controller. I've been trying to concentrate on my eq but you make some good points about my form or lack there of haha.

Sick future dub feel.