@ iorek I like the groove that develops at 1:33, maybe you could build on that short little section a bit, maybe drop out the piano for another sound in sections. You may want to layer a sine wave for a sub underneath your bass sound @ budspencertron, nice retro vibe you got going on here, maybe hig...

@BudSpencertron thanks for the feedback, yeh I figured that one was for me, respect sir, because I'm really feeling your track, loving the delayed vocals, bass, vibe, break melody, the whole lot, 320 plz :4: if I was to give it any criticism I'd say I'm not sure if I like how the vocal and the melod...

@RandoRando love the intro melody, great drum programming, not sure if its a groove that's danceable but you may not be going for that, bass sounds slightly hollow (current WIP) cool vocal sample, love the first section, but when it hits that second section, I wish the phrase was just repeated once ...

@drzitbag great melody/progression ... lovestep right herrr ... I wish there was this dark sub bass with overtones imitating the melody underneath it all @Fused Productions love the intro very 90's hip hop retro, not sure if I love the bass (sound, melody or wobbles), maybe find the best little 2 ba...

@tactilezero first reaction was wow, love the 3 different sections, the dub out fx, then beat and vocal, and then the dark bass kicks in. You can tell how much time you've spent on this. Only negatives for me was I wished the dark bass section had more peaks and valleys in terms of energy level, it ...

@hudson really nice track overall, great sound choices and atmosphere, send it out to labels! can't hurt right? maybe try haunted audio records, sounds like something they might put out (they are local for me, and a newer label willing to push new artists) ... only negative for me on your track is t...

@ e-mission ... loving the 8 bit low slung vibe here, the weakest section for me starts at 1:36 and ends 2:03, do you need that section? maybe you could add one bar of that at the end of a 16 bar section here and there, just a thought

How can I make this track better? Your feed back is greatly appreciated. cheers http://soundcloud.com/poor-ragged-rascal/prr-take-down @um4mi I like the break and then that high synth kicks in. Maybe if your not going for a wobble on the bassline, you could automate it in some way to create more cha...

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sounds good to me, real nice

nice vibes here and melodies. you could layer a pure sine wave sub underneath your bass sound which has those nice overtones. High pass your original bass at 100 hz.

you could add the abletons vocoder or redux in parts to vary the bass sound. vary the rhythm a bit more as well, and you could always momentarily drop the bass sound out for another sound here and there.

the vocal samples are great the tone of the voice is nice. the weakest part for me is the top end bass, it takes away from how atmospheric everything is. maybe mirror the sub with a top end that pitches down as well.

how can I make this track better?

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