thanks for another free download! really nice vibes on this one, those stabs are lovely. Cheers

Ah yes, I heard that the other day on SC. Very dubby tune and again some real nice ambience

Yeah on another listen that first main section is pretty long. I think the track is fine structure-wise. Instead of re-arranging things, just add stuff to it to keep it interesting. It's just the same bass sound and mostly the same note the whole time so try n add another bass sound or change up the...

Liking the rhythm on those hi-hats, you need to bring them up a bit in volume. Your bassline in the drop is sounding too synthy IMO. Like it sounds more like a pad than a bass synth. Try using slight distortion and layer up your sounds to make them sound big! Need some more EQ on the drums too, and ...

Nice intro - the synths sound cool and I like the how the melody builds up. Love that rush with the pan delayed percussion right before the drop. Thought the high pitched synth was a nice aid to the bassline. I think you should try adding more variation to the bass sound. Try and make it more promin...

Sounding pretty boss to me. Hi-hats are a touch too quiet IMO. Solid ideas and everything works together nicely!

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Nice intro, the piano melody is sweet. Need to do some EQ'ing, those drums are being drowned out bigtime. That drop is pretty mental though, liking the sound design on the bass sounds. Some solid ideas here, just need to tighten the mix!

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Haha yeah I've sampled fire before, I thought it was fire layered with a sample of someone rustling paper or something I love that kinda stuff, adds such a nice atmosphere

Love those fidgety sounds in the intro and those vocals. Really nice drum rhythm and bassline too - got some solid ideas here man, can't wait to hear the finished product!

You definitely have the harsh LFO'd synth sound on par with popular dubstep. Maybe try mixing up the drums a bit by adding some percussion and hits, and get creative with the rhythms. Drop the bass down - sub bass is supposed to be felt more than heard. Also, the part where it is just a solo bassli...

The synth in that intro is pretty cool! Catchy melody too. The drums are pretty heavy which isn't really to my taste, but it fits the track. With your main section you should layer up your bass sounds with a sub bass to make it sound more full. The sound design is pretty neat in the drop but the 'wo...

I'm quite the fan of your work after hearing one of your tracks off Anechoic Chamber! Really enjoyed this track, the sub bass is seriously nice and the delayed keys are lovely. The background foley/ambience gives the track nice surroundings and fills in parts that would otherwise feel empty. Thanks ...

Hazey Dazey - Enjoyed the intro. The pads are a lovely touch and the vocal work is very neat. The first drop, I like the LFO handling and the 4 t the floor kick gives it a real drive. The stops sound pretty pro too! Would've liked to have heard a bit more variation on the sound of the wobbles? Enjoy...

Did this as a bit of fun but it's not really my thing anymore.. has quite a generic sounding bass but let me know what you think

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Not bad for a first track! Try adding more variation to the drum rhythms and add various percussion to spice it up a bit. I think the pads sound pretty sweet and those delayed stabs are a nice touch. The bassline sounds quite generic. Try layering up your bass sounds and adding variations to it to m...

As said above, the snare/clap mix is nice. I'd like to hear more creative rhythms with the drums and a variation of drum hits. Sub bass is sounding nice, just need to EQ a few things to fit in round it, and maybe turn the sub bass down a wee touch? Nice ideas throughout and I like the vocal sample too