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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mrlCLeD6RDA
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I'm not sure why, but whenever I play through the song(and what happened when I saved it)Massive kind of needs to... let's just say 'warm up' and it sounds distorted and wrong the first note that it plays. I don't know why but you'll probably notice.

Interesting stuff. Reminds me of old school MSI. I like it.

Yeah I've never done any music theory or anything like that which probably noticed.

Just my opinion, but having the vocals going with the bass patches after the drop sounds a bit tacky and you over do it a bit with the 'ya' sounding bass.

Nah it's good that you're telling me that. I've listened to it about 30 times so it sounds fluid to me.

I changed it a little bit and re-uploaded. I might try your suggestion of putting in a lead bass instead. I've only been producing a few months so I'm still a bit of a noob by the way.

I think that emo girl is a very talented artist. Haters gonna hate. But I think with this track you just had too much going on.

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I made the song first and then decided it could use some vocals so I tried to match it the best I could.

I'm not sure what the rules are about bumping your own threads, but I posted this 5 days ago with no response.

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Updated. First time mastering a song.

Production wise, I can't give you much advice because I'm a noob. Sound wise though, it sounds pretty good. Defiantly something I'd listen to.

Okay, thank you. I haven't made many tracks which you would probably notice if you looked at my soundcloud.

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