its in the signature please give me some feedback, and it sounds best on a system

Hey Dudes, i just finished this track, give me some advice, your thoughts, etc.
p.s it has alot of subbass its sounds better on a system, not so much off laptop speakers or something like that
here it is
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My new track, its in my signature, tell me what you think grab the free Download if you like

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