@wub, I understand what u mean. I comprehend your opinion about the repetitive feeling. I always have got problems with keeping a track interesting throughout the whole song. Indeed, I maybe should have bring in song more variation in the melody or something. Kick and snare are indeed not really ...

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It's not truly Dubstep, but I hope you don't mind
I personally think it's a little to loud in the breakdown and the build, and some parts contain are some minor flaws.
Hope some of you can complement it with some critical feedback

Thanks!

tnx! well I think you're kinda right about my vocals. I only used 1 like one little piece from an Adele song... When you're creating your song you don't really notice it but indeed, when I listen it back now it gets kinda annoying

Hi guys, this is kinda my first time on this forum, but I think it won't be the last.
Well, this is one of my tracks, I like to get some serious, critical feedback 'cus I really want to move on in producing.
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