Sounds good, it's a bit repetitive even though it's only 17 seconds long. Needs some more sounds.
But you've got a pretty good basic ingredient for a track here.

Intro makes more sense now, I suppose. 0:21-0:35 is still good.
Half-tempo the transition at 0:41, should get a lot better.

The drop is still way too overboard... The synths clash like hell. Try moving the wobbles a few octaves lower or get rid of them altogether. It's just a complete mess as it ...

My bad, posted wrong link, fixed. (also updated on first post)

Version 2...

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Anything before 0:21 is really random.... 0:21 - 0:35 is amazing. Needs a lot better transition there, though. The build is epic, but the drop that follows is WAY overdone.... Way too much going on at the same time and I have a pretty strong feeling that it ruined something absolutely amazing ...

My first 'finished' dubstep production. Very curious about your honest opinions
Thanks for listening!

Original:
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Revised version:
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