Thank you for the feedback. I'll definitely say that variation is something I need to work on in general, and I will surely keep that in mind for future tracks.
Listening back now, I see how the choir sounds a bit sketchy. Also, I don't think my voice would be suitable for this, but I could ...

Thanks for listening. I was a bit unsure of the choir part myself, though, it seemed slightly bland without it.

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I've gone awhile without any proper feedback on my tunes. Tell me what you think.