I really like the arrangement! It sounds very full to me, not really have any tips :P Its
well thanks man. that's great to hear :)

Good ideas in here, felt the mixdown was a little on the messy side though...some of the elements don't appear the same level as the others?
yeah it hasn't been ...

hey guys, i've been sitting on this one for awhile now.

if i could describe it in a quick sentence, i'd say it's the sound of satin and rust against a heavy, complex hip-hop'ish beat.

...yeah..

https://soundcloud.com/xghostofme/xxps-earlymix

would LOVE any tips you can offer regarding the ...

bah.. no love for me

keep working on it man! it sounds good, but you can definitely take it further
fill it out some more, give it some meat (bass?). tweak tweak tweak.

lol dude, you should post a link to the song you want people to hear and on which you want them to leave feedback on. posting links to your social media accounts isn't really relevant to the purpose of this forum's thread.

dude the drop is super dope. that synth's sound goes so well with the brass instruments. the piano in the main sections.. i'd turn down the attack on the keystrokes, add some more reverb, and maybe make it a little wider and sit more in the background of the mix. not sure if the piano is from the ...

hey man, it's sounding cool. good variation in the structure. if i could offer some constructive feedback: if this were my track, i would consider revising the way that lead synth sounds. i feel it has a lot more potential, just needs some tweaks. not sure if that is your synth's LFO doing the ...

those occasional siren noises are pretty sweet

this is pretty fantastic bro

think dark, blissful trance meets high some octane dubstep. with beautiful vocals by Nickie Minshall.

Soundcloud

lwpss wrote:So emotional. I'm not sure if I've ever heard such screams in dubstep.

Right on dude! You got the picture Do you like the screams?

Hahaha and I respect your reaction!

What's mathcore? :|

mathcore is an extreme sub-genre of metal. it's pretty sporadic a lot of the time, making use of a variety of complex and unusual time signatures. here's a more tolerable example of mathcore, in case you're not into metal: http://youtu.be/-Q5qvft2i-s (these guys are way ...

MashySpikePlate wrote:As I said in my soundcloud comment, I love this track, especially the vocals. I'm a big metal fan as well. Where/who are the vocals from?

Thanks! I did them myself bro. I was once a vocalist in a couple mathcore bands, back in the day lol

When i say sitting behind the beat, i just mean maybe a real quiet shaker (just for variation) or something like that to fill in the gaps. That accented staccato feel the beat has is cool, but i just think if it was toned down for part of the track it maybe wouldn't get as samey.
For the record i ...

Some awesome vibes you got going on here.
its probably a personal thing to me, but i like a bit more substance to a beat, if you know what i mean.. I definitely don't think the beat should start at the beginning of the track, because it sounds kinda bare when there's not a whole lot of other stuff ...

wub wrote:Snare is distorting a bit in places around the 3m mark

Hmm.. I don't hear it on my end, but I'll look into it. Thanks for the headsup.

MRG wrote:Yo Man regeae and dubstep are the best combination i like this track nice work

Glad you like it bro!

I feel like the most important piece of input for this track is as Wub said: you need variation. It sounds like you're working in FL Studio, lined up some samples in one of those windows, programmed a drum loop, then looped some basslines.. then put it in the automation window and did copy/paste ...

DUDE! That first drop is absolutely wild- it hits sooo perfectly (same goes for the remainder of the song). This is some high quality, filthy shit bro. I'm legitimately impressed.
You actually NEED to submit this to Ultragore Recordings if you aren't already signed. This is 100% in line with their ...

Well, my very first thread.
I've been perusing this forum from time to time over the last few years and have found a good deal of useful info since, but never committed to creating an account- it's time for ME to share with YOU!

I'd love to hear what you guys have to say about this piece that I've ...