yes i agree , i think tune is a bit too distorted maybe ?
or not enough clear / clean ?
for me , the hook was the basses (formants etc) and vocal was the icing on the cake

The kick is a lot of thud and not much punch, it's having trouble cutting through the mixdown when the midrange etc are all firing. Maybe some subtractive EQing to create a bit of space for it when it hits?

thx for your reply Wub :)
i will try to EQ the rest of the tune to make it fit , or maybe ...

hi guys , i would love to get your feedback on this one , as i am mainly a DnB producer ;)
that's the first dubstep tune i did with Yox , and only did one or two on my own before .

many thanks for your time & give me a link if you want feedback on yours , no problemo :)
here it is :

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