2 possibilities: #1 Your friends are assholes. #2 You are an asshole. I deleted my Facebook account about a year ago. I stopped answering to "friends" who give you a call only on friday and saturday because they need to get drunk, but they have no money. I stopped hanging out with shithea...

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Donaldbeebi wrote:of course I will cut the fuck out of them

Maybe don't take it to that level

Sorry, Im so pissed right now

no worries Don if you exactly understood what I meant, you'd probably feel like a douchebag. Lemme explain, I have classmates that are not douche, and I am friends with them, but they are boring. The friends I am talking about are actually not total douchebags. Whenever I am lucky enough to leave s...

He who can only find friendship amongst douchebags is presumably...? The answer is probably unsatisfying , unless you are willing to admit the truth. Anyway, nothing wrong with being a douchebag as long as you stick to the company of your own kind. Which you are. I dont exactly understand what you ...

sounds like theyre not really your friends or at least friends that arent very good for you recognise them as a drain of your life and cut them out get better friends That is what I have been thinking of bro, but I cant find any friends that are BETTER I am limited to these douchebags. no one is li...

DJoe wrote:you're a sideman. not your a sideman

sorry, tot you were talking about my post

DJoe wrote:terrible grammar

It would be nice to point them out so I can improve

soronery wrote:sounds like theyre not really your friends

or at least friends that arent very good for you

recognise them as a drain of your life

and cut them out

get better friends

That is what I have been thinking of bro, but I cant find any friends that are BETTER
I am limited to these douchebags.

soronery wrote:have you considered its because youre a whingy tnuc

I tried not to be whingy, but that just hurts me
Imagine you are excluded from your friends, how can you not be whingy

Is anyone with me? None of my friends would actively invite me to eat, hang out or play. They just sort of "hate" you in your perspective. Even I am in front of my friends' faces, they can just.. like ignore me, talk about eating together, when, where, with whom and just walk away like Im ...

Sweet song. I cant say much about it that hasnt been said. Your intro was sweet. After the first drop (at 2:18) where its juist chords and drums playing has like no subs tho i think itd fit more if it had heavy subs with long notes. It just seemed out of place coming from the drop to having no subs...

I dont have much to comment on, but I can say it sounds professional, it is unique to me. this dubstep track is quite "happy", i think its because of the melody, xD. I think the lead can be better, like the sound of it can be more wicked. Plus, you shouldnt put the lead at the beginning of...

HigherDose wrote:Not bad at all for a 4th track. Bass is to loud on the drop but the song layout is pretty solid. Not sure I like that weird synth melody that comes in later on the drop don't think it fits in with the style but maybe that's just me.

Its not just you :3

WaveForm wrote:Donaldbeebi » Hey, Increase your drums and compress your bass and sound design. Also learn how mix down a bit better. The sound design itself is great. Cheers!

Yeah, I dont like the drums too, thanks for taking your time btw

CRoW_Dubstep wrote:throw some external fx on your basses

MissingPluto wrote:Sounds pretty good man. Other than the bassline being a little loud, pretty solid for it only being your 4th track.

Thank you all for the feed backs, it really really help me out a LOT

Zippolisko wrote:Yeah, the bassline is slightly too loud and there are some messy parts here and there, but I gotta say that for the 4th track, this is not bad at all. Also the kick is too thin for my tastes, and it really doesn't punch thru in the drop. These are my 2 cents.

Thank you for the feed back :3

khaoto wrote:or maybe its just a bit to loud (the bassline)

hmm, too loud? I thought it was not loud enough so i make the bassline louder I guess thats what makes it too loud for you guys, I got numb when creating it lol

Thank you so much for the comment. about the messy bassline, I understand why this happens the structure was quite messy

Hi. This is my 4th track. I have received comments from this forum about my tracks and I did some improvement accordingly. Hope you like it.
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Harmor is hard to use, though Im learning stuffs with it, but it is kind of frustrating.