Tell me what you guys think about the track, and I hope you enjoy!

P1st0lh34d wrote:some sidechain compression w/ drums and melody could give it that Seven Lions feel

Sounds good, I think I'll give that a try when I come back to this track

I'm thinking there's still room to fix the melody.

Like I can add something to it to make it stand out more, how can I do that?

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Would like to know how I'm doing so far with this remix
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The vocals may have some white noise in the background but that's because I couldn't find a better acapella

Interesting tune... Like the samples and the way they are put together.... And yeah like the other guy said on soundcloud the piano theme reminds me of I'm a big big girl :)
Just had a listen and it does sound a little like it lol
I like the way you think about dynamics, but i would've loved more ...

Benji wrote:It's an awesome song, I've not heard that style of dubstep before

Thanks, glad you liked it and its good to know that it sounds different from most songs

I'm still learning

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snare is weak dude and not enough perc - the melody overides the bass wobble - sounds like im being harsh there but will bennefit the tune if you tweak all the little problems - mario sample is novel lol.
Yea I was wondering how to get that "umph"out of the snare but couldn't. do you think you ...

use the right samples dude get some off the net - i layer 2 or 3 usually one really thuddy/thick snare sound and a clap or rim shot with reverb on it - depends on the snare ure going for - sometimes i just use a woodblock or whatever dude.
Ahh, layering multiple snares, will definitely use that ...

snare is weak dude and not enough perc - the melody overides the bass wobble - sounds like im being harsh there but will bennefit the tune if you tweak all the little problems - mario sample is novel lol.
Yea I was wondering how to get that "umph"out of the snare but couldn't. do you think you ...

I just started producing and I was looking for some feedback on this song I created!
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It is also a free download

Really chill track Xanja, only complaint that I have would be that it's too repetitive but other then that its good

There are many noises happening at the same time, and I don't think my brain can handle it

Really diggin' this tune, I like what you did with it