1st I think you really need to work on your mixing I highly recommend you invest in high quality headphones or speakers (for music) if you're serious about making music or even as a hobby that is a good place to start. 2nd you need to work on the structure of your music listen to music you like and ...

I have to agree with Moch i feel like it could use something not sure what and IMO i feel like the dialogue samples don't really compliment the song maybe they'd fit better if they were used more sparingly but good overall

The drums sound pretty good i feel like the track needs more build up tho and it could use something to keep the rhythm going maybe some ride cymbals but overall good!

I think the song needs more build up at the start and some work on the transitioning between parts its a bit repetitive i feel like it is missing something but i can't really put my finger on it depending on what kind of feel and type of music you're going for i think you're on the right track it ju...

I couldn't really hear all the low end because im listening thru a pair of lower quality headphones but overall i liked the vibe it was nice definitely something i would listen to Update i listend to it thru a sub and yeah its really nice im really feeling the low end :) some variation would be good...