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by MrPies
Fri Jun 28, 2013 3:32 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: 140bpm Neuro/Dubstep track, desperately requiring feedback.
Replies: 15
Views: 1091

Re: 140bpm Neuro/Dubstep track, desperately requiring feedba

thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated! I will PM you about it so you thread stays on topic.
by MrPies
Thu Jun 27, 2013 10:43 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: 140bpm Neuro/Dubstep track, desperately requiring feedback.
Replies: 15
Views: 1091

Re: 140bpm Neuro/Dubstep track, desperately requiring feedba

Reading it back it didn't come across quite as I meant. The samples add a lot of character, I was just curious how dark and moody the track would be without them. I am too used to listening to the same old generic dubstep, you are trying to do something new and the hits should definitely stay as the...
by MrPies
Thu Jun 27, 2013 9:06 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: 140bpm Neuro/Dubstep track, desperately requiring feedback.
Replies: 15
Views: 1091

Re: 140bpm Neuro/Dubstep track, desperately requiring feedba

I like it mate, I think you should set it loose on the public, don't be shy ! :D I am not a big fan of intros in general and usually skip them but I liked your buildup and went back to have another listen. Great job on trying something completely different - the plucked string (what instrument is th...
by MrPies
Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:45 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Zeenith-ALINE SHAP (Dubstep)
Replies: 5
Views: 266

Re: Zeenith-ALINE SHAP (Dubstep)

Your transmission is back sir
by MrPies
Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:37 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: KREASE - TEKTONIK (DEEP SUB OLD SCHOOL FREENESS)
Replies: 6
Views: 488

Re: KREASE - TEKTONIK (DEEP SUB OLD SCHOOL FREENESS)

Nice work. Nice sub, nice "wub" bass, good use of vocal sample - sounds like I have heard it before if you know what I mean, reminded me of an old garage track or something. Usually I try to give creative criticism type comments but I can't think of anything off the top of my head, sorry! :)
by MrPies
Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:23 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Mowy Wowy - Vandal (CLIP) Feedback? DARK/DIRTY/GROWLS
Replies: 6
Views: 545

Re: Mowy Wowy - Vandal (CLIP) Feedback? DARK/DIRTY/GROWLS

Really like that. Nice clear separation between your high end, growly bass and sub. The hi hats get a little lost in the mix for me, but I am using shitty headphones.
I am loving the growls, what software did you use?
by MrPies
Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:07 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Paradigm "Falling Down" (ftr dub) needs comments plse
Replies: 4
Views: 714

Re: Paradigm "Falling Down" (ftr dub) needs comments plse

4000 comments on the song and you need more feedback ? :)
My feedback would be if it is getting that much attention send it off to be mastered put it on itunes or wherever and link to it in your description.
by MrPies
Wed Jun 26, 2013 9:12 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Falling (Work In Progress) - Alexander Gastrell
Replies: 6
Views: 657

Re: Falling (Work In Progress) - Alexander Gastrell

Really like your vocal work here mate. Completely up to you, but I think the intro would be better starting with the part 12 seconds in. Try it :) Also, the 'F' in falling in the intro has a bit of a hiss on it I think (unless that is a hat or something?), if it isn't intentional you might be able t...
by MrPies
Wed Jun 26, 2013 8:56 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: WHEELTON - OPEN YOUR MIND (DUBSTEP/CHILL VIBES)
Replies: 3
Views: 160

Re: WHEELTON - OPEN YOUR MIND (DUBSTEP/CHILL VIBES)

Love the radio tuning on the intro and of course the vocal. I was kind of hoping that there would be a little more of the vocal - maybe a "wooah" or "yeah", but that is of course up to you and it sounds just fine without. Nothing stood out to me as too loud or too soft in the mix...
by MrPies
Wed Jun 26, 2013 8:41 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Lunch Meat - Oscar Mayer(dubstep)(Feedback?)
Replies: 3
Views: 396

Re: Lunch Meat - Oscar Mayer(dubstep)(Feedback?)

haha I like the mad spoken samples :) Here are a few bits that you could look at if you want to make your song sound a bit more polished: I think the whoosh sound in the intro and the vocal might be a little too loud or dry, they could do with sitting back in the mix a bit imo. I would also fade the...
by MrPies
Mon Jun 24, 2013 10:59 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Gimme some feedback (Glitch hop/grime)
Replies: 6
Views: 1048

Re: Gimme some feedback (Glitch hop/grime)

I think this is a big improvement. Couple of bits that you could still polish, there is some weird glitches around 1:15 mark, they don't sound intentional maybe because of the delay going into the breakdown section? Here and at 2:35 the delay seems a bit much. My guess is that the delay is an insert...
by MrPies
Mon Jun 24, 2013 12:43 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Mr Pies - JamBoy 140 BPM
Replies: 2
Views: 399

Re: Mr Pies - JamBoy 140 BPM

Cool - Thanks for the feedback. The song I am working on at the moment is quite different to this and will hopefully be a step nearer what I want to sound like. I put this up to hopefully get some feedback on the mix and overall sound quality
by MrPies
Sun Jun 23, 2013 10:00 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Cornflayk - Mend
Replies: 4
Views: 387

Re: Cornflayk - Mend

Hi, The overall sound as a whole is really good. Your mixdown sounds good to me, nothing is standing out as too loud/too soft. The choir sample detracts from a professional sound though ...it would work really well if it wasn't a stock sounding sample, but who has access to a real choir eh?. Maybe r...
by MrPies
Sun Jun 23, 2013 9:46 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Photon Man - Helios [Zomboy/xKore-ish Dubstep]
Replies: 7
Views: 662

Re: Photon Man - Helios [Zomboy/xKore-ish Dubstep]

I like! That synth where I commented is real nice, what did you use to make it if you don't mind me asking? Only critical thing I would say is the sound that first comes in at 16 seconds sounds a little out of place to me. Too prominent? Not enough effects? Not sure. The rest of it was spot on thoug...
by MrPies
Sun Jun 23, 2013 8:52 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Zeenith-ALINE SHAP (Dubstep clip)
Replies: 3
Views: 157

Re: Zeenith-ALINE SHAP (Dubstep clip)

The lead synth sounds a tiny bit shrill to me and I think it is probably sucking a bit of punch out of the drums as well. The vocal sample is good in a kind of annoying way :), I played it 3 times to try and work out what it was saying. Want to put me out of my misery? Sounds promising - finish it !...
by MrPies
Sun Jun 23, 2013 8:44 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: ExGauge - Draconian (Untongue) (Dubstep)
Replies: 3
Views: 422

Re: ExGauge - Draconian (Untongue) (Dubstep)

The headphones I am using right this minute came free with my phone :)
My flat mates probably wouldn't appreciate me using my speakers. Looking to get a new pair of seinheisers but they are like £300....I can't justify the cost!
by MrPies
Sun Jun 23, 2013 8:35 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: The Wonky Wonk
Replies: 4
Views: 523

Re: The Wonky Wonk

Really enjoyed that. Well balanced track. Nice wide, clear sound. Well done! I'm quite a newb so I can't really advise munch on the wonky sound you are after. Maybe try two lfos on one parameter with different settings? And for the drums, reason has a "shuffle' option, which might help. Or try ...
by MrPies
Sun Jun 23, 2013 8:14 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: ExGauge - Draconian (Untongue) (Dubstep)
Replies: 3
Views: 422

Re: ExGauge - Draconian (Untongue) (Dubstep)

Hi ExGauge, I liked it The Intro white noise was a little harsh for me, I think it needs turning down or EQing a little. I like the guitar esq synth its nice. The vocal samples are pretty sweet as well. That plucky string guitar sound gives it almost an indian vibe. Nice change up at 1:50. I thought...
by MrPies
Sun Jun 23, 2013 8:02 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: NEW DUBSTEP 2013 - Automatic Transform by Dalotec
Replies: 2
Views: 258

Re: NEW DUBSTEP 2013 - Automatic Transform by Dalotec

Good clarity of sound especially the drums! Personally, I thought the second section could do with a bit more variation but that is just my opinion. Nice track, good job!
by MrPies
Sun Jun 23, 2013 7:51 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Dubstep - AGNC 3 Tracks, Feedback?
Replies: 2
Views: 257

Re: Dubstep - AGNC 3 Tracks, Feedback?

Hi, Bit of constructive feedback below. Hope you don't think I am slating your work completely, it's got some promising bits in there, keep it up! 1) I like the actual tune, it's nice! But the quality of the sound is a little 'muddy'. Are you doing some side chaining or something? If so, maybe try d...