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worked a bit more on 'warning', mixing on headphones though so i sadly can't mix this properly until i get back to university. also made it longer so it's an actual song lol

nice choice of sample

the synth that happens every bar seems to be a bit too loud compared to the rest of the song i think
going to agree with the previous poster, i don't know if it is actually off beat but it sure feels that way. a little hard to find the beat

those drums are on point, it's a little empty however in the hats department.

the buildup synth is a bit too overtly "yayaya" for my taste, but the synth at the drop hits hard

i think the "YEAH" sample is a little off beat (too early)

and yeah, a little brightening up will go a long way

https://soundcloud.com/heckxx/justin-timberlake-suit-and-tie

it's a bit of trap and r&b, been listening to a lot of cashmere cat lol

to be more topical for this forum's genre, here's a loud as fuck (and nowhere NEAR finished; just did this today) WIP i'm going to put on an upcoming album maybe ...