it's very clean to my ears, especially in the beginning. you could use some white noise to mess things up and / or sidechaining compression to get more dynamics

hi,
i made this new track, let me know what you think.
peace

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good production, but a little too clean for my linking. or maybe too harmonious, i dont know

thanks for your feedback!
true, it's a bit off beat, and the beat is sometimes hard to find. thats what i tried to make it sound like. maybe i should have done that a bit more subtle.
thank you again, you are helpful!

hey,
thank you for the feedback, i will check on that.

another song i made. tell me what you think. thx very much!
https://soundcloud.com/obamah/foals-on-acid

would be glad to hear what you think about this one
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cheers