ok i get you so maybe bring it up to 140 ish a again then cut out like half the snares so the backround percussion comes through more and maybe extend the hi hats?

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been working on this for a few weeks now really need feedback not sure about the 4/4 beat towards the end i think too many breaks and need some more variation in my snares

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been told by my dub peers and friends that this is the best track ive done so i thought it would definitely be worth getting some feedback and constructive criticism !

yeh the sub it needs tonalizing i think what did you use to make it? you could try adding distortion, turn the wet up the way up but keep the drive down and it will bring out some of the octaves within it to give it more tone but thats on massive so i dont know how you would go about it but yeh its ...

i really like some of those growls, and those ethnic drums on the second drop are spot on the only thing id say id theres slightly too much feed back on the delay of the vocals samples so it makes them a bit messy in the break other than that the overall mix is fucking sickkkk i love that delayed ...

@Velicious i see where your'e coming from there mate i agree completely those high hats sound way too heavy and tinny , and deep dubstep is what i was going for so thankyou! i get what you mean where it needs some more variation thanks for the feedback i really appreciate it!

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this is one of the first proper tracks i did still needs work though so would love any creative criticism and feedback!

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the whole thing overall sounds really cool im just not sure about the high hats and the pause after each snare is cool but id space it out slightly so its got something to keep it flowing along at the moment it sounds the slightest bit too sporadic and broken ?the mix overall though is cool i thing ...

sounds really cool man very dubby im jealous of all your zaps and pops and stuff , only thing i would say is the bass needs bringing forward slightly or maybe some distortation to give it some body

sounds good id suggest trying to structure you song more in the sense that the mid break is a third to long i think or somewhere there abouts . or maybe trying recombining your two basses at the end i always find it sound interesting if you say chope every other note out one bass line and replace it ...

youngstas been calling similar stuff bass and space which i thought was a pretty good name

MASSIVE all the way especially in fl studio , keep hold of sytrus though because its great for using the piano and trumpet presets and running them under a tonne of effects so when you use the two together you can get some great mixtures especcially for reggae/dub stuff, also look for a plugin ...

@dj-antmouth, cheers very much i was hoping for some criticism and ways to improve but this was a much better surprise!haha if you like i can upload an mp3 and make it downloadable . how do i post or where should i post them i have absolutely no idea how to go about that, could you link me to a ...

https://soundcloud.com/som-aghabala/bassickmeditation
like i said this is my first ever upload id really appreciate any feed back and if you leave a link on any of your comments ill be happy to send you some to!