Scratch that, I got Pro back up. Uploading revisions now.

@123kidd,
I'll try that out.

Fuck my life, I made changes to the vocals to make em flow better and when I cancelled my Pro account it cancelled the revision -.-

Will post soon!

you're on the right track here. You have good sounds through the track.

I think you just need to work on the vocals and bass arrangements. I can see where you are going with it, but it feels a little too choppy as you change between the two. I'd be looking at making them flow a little nicer and be ...

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Not sure if it's done yet, but this was a really fun project.

*Constructive* criticism is GREATLY appreciated. <3

Thanks, guys.

poquepoque wrote:List of defects is too long to be written here.
can say only that you must have more and more practice.

Very useful feedback, indeed. Can you at least give some pointers?

I lol'd Emm, XD

I'll take that into serious consideration. It's 5:53am here so I can't exactly comprehend your feedback entirely xD

Removed it til I finish. Didn't see a delete post button. Thanks for the feedback, guys.