I've been working on a new tune;

http://soundcloud.com/david-bass/drip-feed

Any feedback is appreciated

I have been working on this tune (on headphones) and would appreciate any comments.
Do the hihats sound too trebly? I don't know if it's my monitors compared to the headphones.

Thanks


http://soundcloud.com/david-bass/first-mix

I have been working on this tune (on headphones) and would appreciate any comments.
Do the hihats sound too trebly? I don't know if it's my monitors compared to the headphones.

Thanks


http://soundcloud.com/david-bass/first-mix