in cetain circumstances stealing is bad for your karma, and im not bragging about it, lol, but whatever, i know my production abilities wouldnt be what they are today without these headphones, thats all im saying, they really helped me a shitload
The only problem I can see with a question like this (legitimate as it may be) is that it is completely unnecessary to make an internet thread about this topic. The (very obvious) reason for this is you could find the answer with a 2-second google search. Look, I type in google:
Already been done for Native Instruments. Telefon Tel Aviv and Ricahrd Devine in the same sound pack. Antiserum used a Telefon Tel Aviv sample in Skullfucked.
you definitely have the right idea. work on making your bass more thick and cutting, also work on making your snare more powerful. it seems like your accompanying sound effects are stronger than the bass and that shouldn't be that way. really good for a first go, however.
I feel like the best producers don't need to post tunes and get feedback. There's a lot of people who don't really participate actively on message boards who make incredible music, they dig their own tunes, and require no external validation. Getting to know people personally, rather than publicly ...