Really appreciate the feedback, thanks for that Kapital

Working on a second version now, think you are spot on about points 1. and 3. Going to add a drop and extend it a bit, and throw in some more fills and melodies

evening all hoping you wouldn't mind taking a listen to a first attempt. very new to the genre and the production side of things. drums don't sound too great yet and I think the bass might be a bit sparse. needs to drop as well, as you will hear. thinking of investing in a synth and some software fo...