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Post by paravrais » Mon Jan 19, 2009 1:53 pm

Was too ill to go out yesterday so I just made this tune instead (Wiibowling on my virb), not sure if I should put more into it or just move onto the next one, itching to make a jungle or hip hop tune atm actually..

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Post by steveydubz » Mon Jan 19, 2009 6:33 pm

2 tunes im sort of in the middle of! ive put them on my space

www.myspace.com/steveydubs

feedback please :lol:

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Post by zillion » Mon Jan 19, 2009 8:58 pm

Just finished one called Live free.

Now up on my myspace.
Iceni 5 // Filthy Digital /// Nomadic Art Organisation (Sly Puff)

http://www.iceni5.co.uk

Out Now On Iceni 5.....
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Post by legend4ry » Fri Jan 23, 2009 11:41 am

http://www.divshare.com/download/6382747-39e


No bass or anything and on the drop the chords are tempory (the ones out of scale , since I have no music theory, its a matter of finding what works :x If people can help on the chords would be great.. the first one is..
D - F - A.. So what "could" I do for chord progression?
Soulstep wrote: My point is i just wanna hear more vibes
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Post by legend4ry » Fri Jan 30, 2009 2:22 pm

^

Very organic sounding, liking the feel of it.









Working on this http://www.divshare.com/download/6441367-6cd

bit empty atm but worked hard on those kicks and snares :lol:
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Post by pdomino » Fri Jan 30, 2009 2:45 pm

Legendary wrote:^
Very organic sounding, liking the feel of it.
Working on this http://www.divshare.com/download/6441367-6cd
bit empty atm but worked hard on those kicks and snares :lol:
Nice back bone, sounds a bit 'droney' .... get more hats in to create movement and some more stabs of colour to perk it up (if thats where your trying to take it)
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Post by pdomino » Fri Jan 30, 2009 2:48 pm

Vesicle wrote:http://www.zshare.net/audio/54857129679d1e71/

Loads of red wine and an urge to do something different than what we usually do :wink:
Nice feel to this piece, the break needs eq'ing and/or dropping into the mix bit better imo, bring that bass through a bit more (edit: maybe not, sounds like it panned right perhaps, only noticed as im on headphones)

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Post by darkmatteruk » Fri Jan 30, 2009 3:11 pm

futures_untold wrote:Here's a random vocoded tibetan monk glitchy thing! :o ;)
that sounds really good, i love a bit of glitch. could do with some beats in there somewhere.

if you ever do more with this and even finish it, give me a shout, would like to hear finished article

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Post by futures_untold » Fri Jan 30, 2009 3:21 pm

darkmatterUK wrote:
futures_untold wrote:Here's a random vocoded tibetan monk glitchy thing! :o ;)
that sounds really good, i love a bit of glitch. could do with some beats in there somewhere.

if you ever do more with this and even finish it, give me a shout, would like to hear finished article
Thanks for the support man! :)

I'm unlikely to take it any further tbh, but I may do something similar.

Before I did this, I dragged five random mp3's into Reaper, lined them all up and bounced the result. Next I rexed it and imported it into Reason. There I just drew in random notes on the sequencer and got some pretty cool glitchy rhythmic results! :)

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Post by pdomino » Fri Jan 30, 2009 6:33 pm

couple of sections, needs stuff doing...probly later, thoughts please.
PAUL - CIRCULAR MUSIC.mp3

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Post by requiem.mf » Fri Jan 30, 2009 6:38 pm

Legendary wrote:http://www.divshare.com/download/6382747-39e


No bass or anything and on the drop the chords are tempory (the ones out of scale , since I have no music theory, its a matter of finding what works :x If people can help on the chords would be great.. the first one is..
D - F - A.. So what "could" I do for chord progression?

DFA is Dm chord. You can keep D as root and roll with D minor scale (DEFGAA#C). Or use G minor scale (GAA#CDD#F). Or A minor (ABCDEFG).


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Post by pdomino » Thu Feb 05, 2009 10:53 am

flateric wrote:Second Edit: Even bigger than the last one with drums and a fade out at the end to make you think that it doesn't really end.
Prefer the synth pattern change after the intro type bit, but is more of a house beat surely!?

Edit: Loop that is bigger in comparison
Jst the melody loop?

Little loop
Another variation, nice sound, develop it
PAUL - CIRCULAR MUSIC.mp3

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Post by flateric » Thu Feb 05, 2009 3:01 pm

pdomino wrote:
Prefer the synth pattern change after the intro type bit, but is more of a house beat surely!?
The part where the gate changes sync? Yeah it's a house beat, just a drum loop from fl but I plan on adding some drums after I've ironed everything out and am working in audio. Will end up will lots of chopping and changing and won't be so house-like if I finish it.
I like the feel of this track, very laid back and chilled out. The sound right at the start (one that sounds like a vocal-pad) reminds me of an electronica track that came free with future music/computer music awhile ago that I was impressed with. What are you planning on doing with it, where are you taking it etc

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Post by chrish » Thu Feb 05, 2009 3:27 pm

I need to add a sub to it still, and work on mixing it better, but some input would be good. Not sure if I am completely wasting my time with it or not. track is called Mind Funk. I like it because it is odd & out of sync, but not sure if it's just me.

http://www.virb.com/2410464737369413

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Post by pdomino » Thu Feb 05, 2009 3:35 pm

flateric wrote:
pdomino wrote:
Prefer the synth pattern change after the intro type bit, but is more of a house beat surely!?
The part where the gate changes sync? Yeah it's a house beat, just a drum loop from fl but I plan on adding some drums after I've ironed everything out and am working in audio. Will end up will lots of chopping and changing and won't be so house-like if I finish it.
I like the feel of this track, very laid back and chilled out. The sound right at the start (one that sounds like a vocal-pad) reminds me of an electronica track that came free with future music/computer music awhile ago that I was impressed with. What are you planning on doing with it, where are you taking it etc
I like the sounds alot, I produce and mix house music too, liked where it could go, get some percussion and hats for movement and some complimentary synth bits, mess to your hearts content. :)

Thanks for your comments.
The track needs a bit of beef IMO and the synth is a VST from a Korg collection pack ;)

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Post by chrish » Thu Feb 05, 2009 3:36 pm

That will be a dope tune. It has a chilled, mid nineties progressive feel to it. The elements all seem to sit very nicely together. Good work.

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Post by pdomino » Thu Feb 05, 2009 3:42 pm

ChrisH wrote:
That will be a dope tune. It has a chilled, mid nineties progressive feel to it. The elements all seem to sit very nicely together. Good work.
Thanks very much, thats where I wanted to go, few tweeks and some additions last night. haha Exactly .... 'will be' :wink:

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