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delirium_p · Post by **delirium_p** » Thu Feb 26, 2009 3:06 pm

Yea the tunes not bad bruv , i agree with you though the drop sounds too messy to me id prefer the drop without the bass but then keep the bit jus before it drops , and mayb lose the sample , jus an idea?

Could you give any feedback on mine ( like 2 posts above) 1st attempt at dubstep so quite eager to no wot people think
safe.

@ low pass thanks for the advice , im usin 5 pound headphones atm while saving for some monitors so any advice on levels is appreciated.

fuzz_2k · Post by **fuzz_2k** » Thu Feb 26, 2009 9:37 pm

yo delirium_p,

tanx 4 the comments! your tune flows nicely but the main lead noise needs to b pushed 4ward in the mix! so it sounds more bright n wet!
Overall the track keeps me listening all the way thru just needs a bit of brightness

peace

delirium_p · Post by **delirium_p** » Thu Feb 26, 2009 9:42 pm

fuzz_2k wrote:yo delirium_p,

tanx 4 the comments! your tune flows nicely but the main lead noise needs to b pushed 4ward in the mix! so it sounds more bright n wet!
Overall the track keeps me listening all the way thru just needs a bit of brightness peace

Safe for feedback , but could expand a lil on pushing it forward in the mix duno weva i understand wat u mean or not?

fuzz_2k · Post by **fuzz_2k** » Thu Feb 26, 2009 11:41 pm

just thought the lead was sounding a little bit murky, mayb highpass it to make it more distinct, just my opinion. big ups

pk- · Post by **pk-** » Fri Feb 27, 2009 1:00 pm

http://pjpk.net/music/masterdon.mp3

never going to finish it

delirium_p · Post by **delirium_p** » Fri Feb 27, 2009 1:49 pm

fuzz_2k wrote:just thought the lead was sounding a little bit murky, mayb highpass it to make it more distinct, just my opinion. big ups

Nah thanks for the feedback , im working on £5 pair of headphones atm so havent got the best idea of how it sounds so any feedback like that im grateful of stil.

wave o · Post by **wave o** » Sat Feb 28, 2009 12:44 am

A little update on what I was working on....

http://www.divshare.com/download/6675069-952

yo im feelin the synth thats running around 1:30 in or so a little to busy with to many contrasting vocals but sounds good other then that

Thanks for the feedback, you might be right on the vocals bit. As much as I like them and I do like the contrast, it can be too busy. Going to edit a bit more, but I like some of the change ups so far.

antipode · Post by **antipode** » Sat Feb 28, 2009 7:52 am

http://pjpk.net/music/masterdon.mp3

never going to finish it

sick drums

Started a new tune earlier today. Still pretty barebones.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/5629393382e4d10b/

lowpass · Post by **lowpass** » Sat Feb 28, 2009 11:48 am

My thing that I started yesterday, only got a 16 bar drop sorted so far, would like some feedback

http://www.zshare.net/audio/56209023fdb15d9c/

dark elixir · Post by **dark elixir** » Sat Feb 28, 2009 1:44 pm

Lowpass wrote:My thing that I started yesterday, only got a 16 bar drop sorted so far, would like some feedback

http://www.zshare.net/audio/56209023fdb15d9c/

nice bro

also check out my preview i aint finished it i put the first edit on my page

http://myspace.com/greefdubz

its the top track

thanks

BOOOOOOOOOOOOM

big thread

fuzz_2k · Post by **fuzz_2k** » Sat Feb 28, 2009 5:59 pm

Lowpass wrote:My thing that I started yesterday, only got a 16 bar drop sorted so far, would like some feedback

http://www.zshare.net/audio/56209023fdb15d9c/

keep on it! sounds heavy

delirium_p · Post by **delirium_p** » Sun Mar 01, 2009 5:10 pm

Lowpass wrote:My thing that I started yesterday, only got a 16 bar drop sorted so far, would like some feedback

http://www.zshare.net/audio/56209023fdb15d9c/

Only a quik 16 bar so obviously cant give too much feedback but i wana hear more put it tht way

lowpass · Post by **lowpass** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 11:09 am

dark elixir wrote:
Lowpass wrote:My thing that I started yesterday, only got a 16 bar drop sorted so far, would like some feedback

http://www.zshare.net/audio/56209023fdb15d9c/
nice bro

also check out my preview i aint finished it i put the first edit on my page

http://myspace.com/greefdubz

That bass is really big, I thought maybe too loud but you could probably just eq some bits out a little to give the other parts room to breathe. I like that rise sample you got going on before the drop, what is that?

@ Delirium if your monitoring system is cheap and its hard to tell whats happening, just listen to some other tracks through your headphones and listen to the levels of all the instruments then compare the mix to your own to hear how the levels should generally sound.

I've updated my track now, got a 32 bar intro and beefed the the drop to around 48 bars atm, someone said the bass isn't strong enough when it comes in, i've turned it up a little in comparison with the rest of the instruments not sure if it needs any more work? saturation? distortion?

http://www.zshare.net/audio/563989348dda144a/

smo · Post by **smo** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 1:30 pm

just having a mess about with a new thing. still in the early stages

http://rapidshare.com/files/204250104/d ... ockney.mp3

ignore the vocal samples, there just in there for a bit of a laugh!

also, loving the track lowpass heavy hitting!

robsmith86 · Post by **robsmith86** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 5:56 pm

Easy Folks,

Heres a lil lick i bn working on. Nicked sum Bjork vocals aswell

http://www.zshare.net/audio/564154384c618719/

p.s Luvin ur track Lowpass!!

peace

b.p music · Post by **b.p music** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 8:23 pm

im new to the forum.. just downloading some of the tracks from here.. i'll check them out..

have a listen to this, finished the other day..

let me know what you people think

http://www.mediafire.com/?jkozdmwm1zr

b.p music · Post by **b.p music** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 8:39 pm

needs some opions on this track pls, first on the virb player
possibly sounds a bit messy at the drop?!
what do you think

yeh those tunes are sick man.. yeh in my opinion the drop is sick just needs some tidying up.. i was thinking a low cut at about 40 hz on the sub as it seems to overpower the mid range a bit and perhaps a briter, longer reverb on the wobble.. listened to the others ones aswell.. nice work man!!

sectionattack · Post by **sectionattack** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 10:12 pm

Just uploaded this track intro I've been working on.... not too sure if it works... is it even dubstep? lol.... have a look and let me know what you think...

the track is 'ninety two' http://www.myspace.com/sectionattack

viralcode · Post by **viralcode** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 1:02 am

Lowpass wrote:
dark elixir wrote:
Lowpass wrote:My thing that I started yesterday, only got a 16 bar drop sorted so far, would like some feedback

http://www.zshare.net/audio/56209023fdb15d9c/
nice bro

also check out my preview i aint finished it i put the first edit on my page

http://myspace.com/greefdubz

That bass is really big, I thought maybe too loud but you could probably just eq some bits out a little to give the other parts room to breathe. I like that rise sample you got going on before the drop, what is that?

@ Delirium if your monitoring system is cheap and its hard to tell whats happening, just listen to some other tracks through your headphones and listen to the levels of all the instruments then compare the mix to your own to hear how the levels should generally sound.

I've updated my track now, got a 32 bar intro and beefed the the drop to around 48 bars atm, someone said the bass isn't strong enough when it comes in, i've turned it up a little in comparison with the rest of the instruments not sure if it needs any more work? saturation? distortion?

http://www.zshare.net/audio/563989348dda144a/

just downloaded your track there....great intro... very dark...

love the voice sample etc.... the trippy bassline is sssuuuuweeet!

ketamine · Post by **ketamine** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 5:28 pm

robsmith86 wrote:Easy Folks,

Heres a lil lick i bn working on. Nicked sum Bjork vocals aswell

http://www.zshare.net/audio/564154384c618719/

p.s Luvin ur track Lowpass!!

peace

THIS IS BANGER.

But I only hear Busta, where's Bjork?

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