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bandshell · Post by **bandshell** » Sat Feb 28, 2009 4:16 pm

dirty habit

delirium_p · Post by **delirium_p** » Sat Feb 28, 2009 4:19 pm

bandshell wrote:dirty habit

lol look its still early for me

ketamine · Post by **ketamine** » Sat Feb 28, 2009 6:08 pm

Ketamine wrote:Go To Sleep

^^^Nobody? LOL

deadly_habit · Post by **deadly_habit** » Sat Feb 28, 2009 6:27 pm

bandshell wrote:dirty habit

that's my alter ego when i don't shower

mondays child · Post by **mondays child** » Sat Feb 28, 2009 9:47 pm

Right,

I've been listening to a few tracks from various people here, and once again the feedback starts here.
Planta- I like the beat programming, however, you could do with some stronger melodic hooks to drag listeners in. There are some promising ideas and the overall sound is nice and polished.
Ketamine- You asked for some feedback mate, well your track is not bad at all, i reckon you could just do with varying your drums a bit, a few stutters, slow downs and general filter changes can work wonders. The tune itself is actually quite subtle. That's a good thing. It sounds kind of 'whispery' to my ears.
Deadly Habbit- the two Drum and Bass tracks 'Alien Abduction/Remember' are quite cool in a mad Squarepusher kind of way. The way you handle the breakbeats is really good, and the levels sound just about right.

Whilst i'm here, can i say i'm getting a headache listening to loads of wobble and aggressive basslines tearing through my 'earoles, could i ask for a few tunes that don't follow this format. It's getting hard to judge peoples work objectively when the bassline all but drowns out the rest of the track. Pretty please!

mondays child · Post by **mondays child** » Sat Feb 28, 2009 10:00 pm

And as an afterthought, here's a little whisper it...house ditty, i've been a working on.....

Please enjoy.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/563234950d240a48/

the good doctor · Post by **the good doctor** » Sun Mar 01, 2009 1:52 am

just got this finished today let me know what yall tink

first song in player

paravrais · Post by **paravrais** » Sun Mar 01, 2009 11:56 am

I wonder what the ratio is for people who ACTUALLY READ THE FUCKING THREAD RULES and people who don't..

This thread really isn't worth bothering with, I reckon I get less replies here than in the dubs forum cos everyone just posts their link then fucks off.

-dubson- · Post by **-dubson-** » Sun Mar 01, 2009 12:06 pm

paravrais wrote:I wonder what the ratio is for people who ACTUALLY READ THE FUCKING THREAD RULES and people who don't..

This thread really isn't worth bothering with, I reckon I get less replies here than in the dubs forum cos everyone just posts their link then fucks off.

alright then, medeivals on your virb; i quite liked it, its a cool idea. some of the bass sounds sounded abit to loud but the sounds were good. i thought the melody was pretty weak though, you could do something more creative with the high synth. overall a good track though.

-dubson- · Post by **-dubson-** » Sun Mar 01, 2009 12:13 pm

"play it" on my myspace, not my usuall thing but check it, i quite like it

d+ · Post by d+ » Sun Mar 01, 2009 12:18 pm

mondays child wrote:And as an afterthought, here's a little whisper it...house ditty, i've been a working on.....

Please enjoy.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/563234950d240a48/

too much goin on mate!

let the beat breathe!!

with house u are allowed to let a drum loop + audio play for 32 bars with little change

edit: too much reverb on the vocal too - the beats got potential though keep it up

Hide_One · Post by **Hide_One** » Sun Mar 01, 2009 12:19 pm

Subject one

http://myspace.com/hideoneuk

Only a snippet from the track. Need some ideas for the intro.
Will post some reviews later.

Safe.

delirium_p · Post by **delirium_p** » Sun Mar 01, 2009 4:42 pm

D+ wrote:
mondays child wrote:And as an afterthought, here's a little whisper it...house ditty, i've been a working on.....

Please enjoy.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/563234950d240a48/
too much goin on mate!

let the beat breathe!!

with house u are allowed to let a drum loop + audio play for 32 bars with little change

edit: too much reverb on the vocal too - the beats got potential though keep it up

Agree with D+ on this one , i think it would sound better if you just let it play out for a lil bit instead of all the changes involved , overall though its a good track though ,

by the way if i dont give feedback on everyones its because my internets playing up a bit and some of the sites are working for me atm,

manicmckanic · Post by **manicmckanic** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 12:08 am

If anyone has the time for creative critisism:
http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?t=78799

Manix - Journey [320]

Enjoy!

ketamine · Post by **ketamine** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 2:32 am

mondays child wrote:Right,

Ketamine- You asked for some feedback mate, well your track is not bad at all, i reckon you could just do with varying your drums a bit, a few stutters, slow downs and general filter changes can work wonders. The tune itself is actually quite subtle. That's a good thing. It sounds kind of 'whispery' to my ears.

Cheers

-dubson- · Post by **-dubson-** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 5:26 pm

Keggah wrote:Subject one

http://myspace.com/hideoneuk

Only a snippet from the track. Need some ideas for the intro.
Will post some reviews later.

Safe.

nice one, like posted before open hihat is a bit to loud but aside that not much wrong at all. i do think when the hihats go to the offbeat bit a 1:20 the beat loses some shuffle. good tune

edi_x · Post by **edi_x** » Tue Mar 03, 2009 8:48 pm

@ Keggah - Had a listen to 'My Outlook' on your myspace, really enjoyin the chilled vibe of it man. Just a thought, but when the wobble bass kicks in again after about 1:40 or so, it might be good to introduce another little idea to the tune, maybe a different melody line? Just to give a bit of variation and tie off the end of the song nicely.

Subject One is a good heavy tune, the drop's sweet. the variation in the mid-bass/wobble is good, but it sounds to me like they're all at slightly varying volumes.. to get the full impact of the drop you need to make sure they're each as powerful when they kick in if you get me?

@ Lowpass - Broke Island - The key change really took me by suprise! Not very often you hear changes like that in this sort of music. One thing i'd look at is making the drums a bit more aggressive/frantic when the key change kicks in, almost as if it's building up to when the single lead line drops and ends the track

I've just put up my first attempt at a remix, a tune by Jazzanova called I Can See, any feedback would be much appreciated... http://www.myspace.com/pushplaytoday

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