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DeafMan · Post by **DeafMan** » Tue Mar 03, 2009 8:57 pm

Delirium_P wrote:Yea in a way, jus more upbeat but a more slap string style bass similar to off old garage tunes , hard to explain what i mean but upbeat regular notes with a funky slap bass contrasted with a dark bass would work well imo , dark and light go together very well imo

if u get time can u giv some feedback on my track posted few above yours
safe.

I have finally got round to changing the bass line on Give You Love. Would be cool if you could have another listen and let me know what you think.

Tune is here: http://virb.com/2649372446692430

Cheers.

-dubson- · Post by **-dubson-** » Tue Mar 03, 2009 8:59 pm

-Dubson- wrote:"play it" on my myspace, not my usuall thing but check it, i quite like it

no love?

paravrais · Post by **paravrais** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 2:30 pm

-Dubson- wrote:
-Dubson- wrote:"play it" on my myspace, not my usuall thing but check it, i quite like it
no love?

Hold tight i'll be back later an i'll be sure to take a look.

Didn't expect people to take me moaning in such a nice way

and thanks to the people that have given feedback. I'm workin on a new tune atm so once thats fairly finished I'll post it up and take a look at as many other tunes as I can.

paravrais · Post by **paravrais** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 3:54 pm

'Dinosaurs', first track in player http://virb.com/sativabreather

Been working on this the last couple of days, after the first 5 hours-ish I thought it was wicked but now I reckon I've fucked it up but that could just be because i've been working on it for way too much time an I just cant take listening to it anymore..anyways, would like to know what people think and any ways I can improve it.

Mondays Child - That house tune sounds like its pretty well produced to me but I'm afraid it's just really not my kinda thing so I didn't really take to it sry.

Dubson - Pretty good tune, not really a big fan of the bit between 3.30 and 5.00, the crashes are a bit too much and the buildup was a bit harsh too. I liked it up until then though lol. Maybe have less crashes and more sub in the second part? just a thought.

Will give more feedback in response for recieving etc etc

ketamine · Post by **ketamine** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 4:50 pm

paravrais wrote:'Dinosaurs', first track in player http://virb.com/sativabreather

LOL I like this. Would have never thought to sample JP

-dubson- · Post by **-dubson-** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 4:56 pm

paravrais wrote:'

Dubson - Pretty good tune, not really a big fan of the bit between 3.30 and 5.00, the crashes are a bit too much and the buildup was a bit harsh too. I liked it up until then though lol. Maybe have less crashes and more sub in the second part? just a thought.

Will give more feedback in response for recieving etc etc

cheers man will edit it when i can be bothered, will check your new beat sometime soon as well

mondays child · Post by **mondays child** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 5:30 pm

Delerium, D+ and Paravrais, cheers for the feedback guys. It's all good, plus it makes me think "fookin' ell i got that bit wrong, nice one".

I've been working on a few bits of late and need to really start concentrating as i've got some tracks comming on one or two labels. As ever, i'll be sure to check y'alls tracks as and when I can.

It's good here, gives a right warm glow to spread a bit of positivity 'an all!

Please all of you keep up the astonishing work rate. Safe.

legend4ry · Post by **legend4ry** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 6:40 pm

http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/symphony

Dark fucker I am working on.

-dubson- · Post by **-dubson-** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 6:56 pm

Legendary wrote:http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/symphony

Dark fucker I am working on.

love the pecussion on the track, feel it the whole song misses something though. it feels a bit empty. for me i would add more pecussion, synths and effects to fill it out abit

legend4ry · Post by **legend4ry** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 6:57 pm

-Dubson- wrote:
Legendary wrote:http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/symphony

Dark fucker I am working on.
it feels a bit empty

Thats kinda the idea & my style

It is a work in progress though.

awful · Post by **awful** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 9:09 pm

awful wrote:heres a mix of some unfinished tracks i did, http://imawful.com/awful-ohno.mp3 it's 320.. i still wanna work on the mix of the tracks but i had to get this out to see if anyone is feeling it, and if not, lookin for pointers.. thanks a lot

just a shameless bump since i got no love! hehe someone check it out it cant be that bad!

contakt321 · Post by **contakt321** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 9:15 pm

Legendary wrote:http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/symphony

Dark fucker I am working on.

Cool tune, deep and dark.

I didn't love the pitchbend in execution (I like it in concept) but it sounds slightly out of tune.

Also, I love all the subtle effects, but I wonder if one element should be slightly less subtle (not sure what) but I almost didn't catch the first time though.

Peeping your hip-hop track next.

roistermusic · Post by **roistermusic** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 9:38 pm

Legendary:-
I like the idea and the space, i think u could do a bit more work with the percussion elements..they are nice but maybe switch it up a bit. ive been doing loads of conga/tribal stuff at the mo, so im feeling your stuff

CN:-
That tunes nice man...nice old skool garage vibe with new style synths and drums. only on laptop speakers so cant hear bass or give advice..but i like it

Paravrais:-
I like the individual sounds and the idea but i think that the percussion and hats are a bit over bearing on the tune...i like the bass sound and the arrangement..

My turn

I got a new tune up called 'Bits'

kinda different to my normal stuff as it's not straight up dubstep..went for a more chilled vibe...aint finished yet so dont watch the mix!!

www.myspace.com/roistermusic

would like some opinions on it

-dubson- · Post by **-dubson-** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 9:57 pm

awful wrote:
awful wrote:heres a mix of some unfinished tracks i did, http://imawful.com/awful-ohno.mp3 it's 320.. i still wanna work on the mix of the tracks but i had to get this out to see if anyone is feeling it, and if not, lookin for pointers.. thanks a lot
just a shameless bump since i got no love! hehe someone check it out it cant be that bad!

its alright but i didn't like the begining song, the levels aren't to good and beat is too straight up for me, i'd say it got better tunes wise as the mix went on. the last tune is sick

awful · Post by **awful** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 10:08 pm

thanks a lot

awful · Post by **awful** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 10:24 pm

-Dubson- wrote:
awful wrote:
awful wrote:heres a mix of some unfinished tracks i did, http://imawful.com/awful-ohno.mp3 it's 320.. i still wanna work on the mix of the tracks but i had to get this out to see if anyone is feeling it, and if not, lookin for pointers.. thanks a lot
just a shameless bump since i got no love! hehe someone check it out it cant be that bad!
its alright but i didn't like the begining song, the levels aren't to good and beat is too straight up for me, i'd say it got better tunes wise as the mix went on. the last tune is sick

btw lovin the zones song

silentk · Post by **silentk** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 10:37 pm

Title: There's been a mistake.

http://www.divshare.com/download/6722369-bef

would love any feedback you guys can give, any comments are much appreciated.

contakt321 · Post by **contakt321** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 10:48 pm

SilentK wrote:Title: There's been a mistake.

http://www.divshare.com/download/6722369-bef

would love any feedback you guys can give, any comments are much appreciated.

Couldn't tell what was going on with the vocal samples, but I am typically not into those sorts of bits anyway.

Love the synth at 1:00 min in. Great sound man, I like the way it evolves.

Nice tune.

silentk · Post by **silentk** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 11:06 pm

contakt321 wrote:
SilentK wrote:Title: There's been a mistake.

http://www.divshare.com/download/6722369-bef

would love any feedback you guys can give, any comments are much appreciated.
Couldn't tell what was going on with the vocal samples, but I am typically not into those sorts of bits anyway.

Love the synth at 1:00 min in. Great sound man, I like the way it evolves.

Nice tune.

I know what you mean about the vocals, its really only there to add an extra element, i find a track with a vocal in it helps to give something more human to it, people can relate to a track better, if ther is a voice, some words, that go with it.

thats my opinion anyway.

stressor · Post by **stressor** » Fri Mar 06, 2009 4:33 pm

Got a new tune up on the myspace if anyone'd care to take a listen

Feedback would be greatly appreciated!

Tune's called Throwback:
http://www.myspace.com/stressormusic

cheers

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