DOES ANYONE LIKE THIS TUNE I MADE?????

osdenyer · Post by **osdenyer** » Mon Mar 16, 2009 12:47 am

....I'm not sure about it, i need some feed back please.......

its called "Exposure"

www.myspace.com/0verdosedj

Thankyou very much..........

atma · Post by **atma** » Mon Mar 16, 2009 2:43 am

I really like the overall vibe, and I think that the bassline is fun. On a constructive note, I'd suggest that you decrease the complexity of the melody in the tune over all, and perhaps use a different instrument as opposed to the twinkly stuff, maybe an organ or something more like a piano?

Cheers,

Atma

ferrotype music · Post by **ferrotype music** » Mon Mar 16, 2009 12:19 pm

thats a big tune.

osdenyer · Post by **osdenyer** » Mon Mar 16, 2009 1:47 pm

Atma, loved the feed back, cheers mate

Ferrotype Music, nice one1

monotic · Post by **monotic** » Mon Mar 16, 2009 2:03 pm

For me, the 'classical' melody doesn't really work. Nice bass programming, though. I'd focus on that. Push it further with more variations, modulations and interruptions. Then find something similarly bold and striking in a different register to provide a breakdown of some sort etc. Hope that helps.

fuzz_2k · Post by **fuzz_2k** » Mon Mar 16, 2009 4:05 pm

i like it, infact i like it loads

320?!

bils · Post by **bils** » Mon Mar 16, 2009 6:40 pm

I don't know what samples you used, but they're very sweet.
the way you put them together is very well done.
good tune man, defnitly!
the change in rhytm at 2 min is very good

man

this track is freakin awesome

I LOVE THIS TRACK!!!!

SENT ME A 320 RIGHT AWAY!!

bils · Post by **bils** » Mon Mar 16, 2009 6:41 pm

Monotic wrote:For me, the 'classical' melody doesn't really work. Nice bass programming, though. I'd focus on that. Push it further with more variations, modulations and interruptions. Then find something similarly bold and striking in a different register to provide a breakdown of some sort etc. Hope that helps.

btw don't listen to this guy :p your style is unique!

i mean, you can listen to him but this track is really sweet man
i can't stop listening to it!

facebreaka · Post by **facebreaka** » Tue Mar 17, 2009 6:08 pm

love the song, contains a hell a lot of interesting variations
dreamy, it's like i'm on a trip
excellent for a graf. film

320 me please + your other songs (they're brilliant too)

osdenyer · Post by **osdenyer** » Tue Mar 17, 2009 6:08 pm

cheers guys for your feedback,

btw i programmed it all, using no samples to answer "bils" question...

......new track coming soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!

bils · Post by **bils** » Tue Mar 17, 2009 7:03 pm

allright, any chance of seeing an mp3 version of exposure?
grtz.

snf · Post by **snf** » Wed Mar 18, 2009 4:42 am

this tune is awesome! contrast between the complex, light melody and the filthy bass hits me. as others mentioned your breakdowns are sick too - remind me of akira kiteshi - pinball

well produced all around

respect

drum syndicate · Post by **drum syndicate** » Wed Mar 18, 2009 5:03 am

this is a really fun tune. something about that twinkling lead gives it a really playful vibe... and the bassline is nice

would like to hear a clean version of it instead of thru the myspaz player

i think if this was cleaned up and the dynamics were on point this would be a SUPER smasher of a tune

holler!

drum syndicate · Post by **drum syndicate** » Wed Mar 18, 2009 5:07 am

the other 2 tunes are solid too... lots of heavy movement... lots of good sounds

my concern is that you may be mastering these way too loud and that's gonna kill the dynamics of the tunes.

just a suggestion.. go back thru each sample and make sure it's as clean as possible... no clashing frequency ranges between the various samples... this will clean up any mud in there and make sure that the twinkle in your tune has that clean ring to it and your basslines thump and don't clash

you have some solid ideas and I would definitely like to see these bad boys rock on a large system

baydestrian · Post by **baydestrian** » Wed Mar 18, 2009 10:10 pm

Nice tune.. A little bit cluttered, but good.

DOES ANYONE LIKE THIS TUNE I MADE?????

DOES ANYONE LIKE THIS TUNE I MADE?????

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