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DeafMan · Post by **DeafMan** » Sun Mar 29, 2009 3:31 pm

Anyone played this tune out? Would be sick to hear what people think of it if you have.

DeafMan · Post by **DeafMan** » Sun Mar 29, 2009 7:31 pm

Shameless bump

SK3W3R · Post by **SK3W3R** » Sun Mar 29, 2009 11:06 pm

filthyis the new clean

love it

DeafMan · Post by **DeafMan** » Sun Mar 29, 2009 11:38 pm

nice one

bloodydan · Post by **bloodydan** » Sun Mar 29, 2009 11:58 pm

GARBS. sorry.

DeafMan · Post by **DeafMan** » Mon Mar 30, 2009 9:27 am

Fair enough if you don't like it but surely some constructive criticism would be a bit more positive. There must be a reason why.

DeafMan · Post by **DeafMan** » Tue Mar 31, 2009 3:37 pm

zillion · Post by **zillion** » Tue Mar 31, 2009 3:51 pm

Sounding a bit quite down my end.

Pretty deep tune. Heavy Sub bassline aswell.

Could do with turning the snare up gets lots in the sub bass in parts.

DeafMan · Post by **DeafMan** » Tue Mar 31, 2009 4:28 pm

Cool.

Cheers for the advise appreciate it!

Thanks for listening.

simple · Post by **simple** » Tue Mar 31, 2009 8:05 pm

Listening now...loving it....hit me with a 320? Cheers....slumper!

steve velocity · Post by **steve velocity** » Tue Mar 31, 2009 8:49 pm

My feedback is gonna sound a little different than what most people have said about this tune it looks like....

The levels in this tune need work imo... The Snare is SUPER quiet and all the percussion/hats sounds off balance to the kick.
Also, the kick could smack a tad harder with another (different) kick or two layered underneath it for added depth.

I also think its lacking a 'hook,' something that keeps the listener captivated and excited for more.

DeafMan · Post by **DeafMan** » Tue Mar 31, 2009 11:53 pm

Cheers, its good to hear what people think could be better. Im going to make some adjustments and have a think about the hook.

Thanks.

joshbdoc · Post by **joshbdoc** » Thu Apr 02, 2009 7:50 pm

I'm definitely liking this tune. I would have to agree with others that the snare is pretty quiet and needs to come out more, but the overall structure is nice.

DeafMan · Post by **DeafMan** » Sun Apr 05, 2009 12:11 pm

Cheers guys I have taken into consideration your feedback and I have a newer version of the tune here:

http://www.divshare.com/download/7018396-f3d

Would be good if you could let me know if you think its better!

Cheers!

DeafMan · Post by **DeafMan** » Sun Apr 05, 2009 9:36 pm

buuump

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