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jjbutler88 · Post by **jjbutler88** » Sat Apr 18, 2009 10:41 pm

Yeah, needs some variance in the structure but that sample is quality

Perhaps a meatier bassline as well, what are you using to make it?

osky · Post by **osky** » Sat Apr 18, 2009 10:52 pm

jjbutler88 wrote:Yeah, needs some variance in the structure but that sample is quality

Perhaps a meatier bassline as well, what are you using to make it?

FL7 & Albino3

keyz · Post by **keyz** » Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:14 pm

new one its called faulty elevator

check it out

www.myspace.com/brokenkeyzz

mat_de_b · Post by **mat_de_b** » Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:53 pm

@ Keyz
That violin sounding synth thing i would say makes the whole thing flow to smoothly atleast for the begging minute so something changing it up a little would be cool... the other jerky synth that comes in at the begining sounds like its slightly out of time but that may be the ears...

However i liked it alot more on the second listen, its not particularly dubsteppy at some points... but i guess thats a matter of opinion...

keyz · Post by **keyz** » Sun Apr 19, 2009 11:05 am

yea its suppose to be delayed like that, appreciate da feedback tho

yh the second wobbles soundin nice fam

dedman · Post by **dedman** » Sun Apr 19, 2009 1:53 pm

http://www.zshare.net/audio/58875640957033c7/ new finished track, feedback please?

karmacazee · Post by **karmacazee** » Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:06 am

keyz wrote:new one its called faulty elevator

check it out

www.myspace.com/brokenkeyzz

Reminds me of Gangsta rap, in a good way.

Actually, this track is crying out for some vocal action. Do you know any good MC's?

But maybe the hats could do with some velocity changes? Sounds a bit robotic after a while :p

karmacazee · Post by **karmacazee** » Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:08 am

dedman wrote:http://www.zshare.net/audio/58875640957033c7/ new finished track, feedback please?

More sub please!

jbird22 · Post by **jbird22** » Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:15 am

New track "Pileup Revisited", first track in player.

Some feedback would be great.

Peace!

antics · Post by **antics** » Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:17 am

dedman wrote:http://www.zshare.net/audio/58875640957033c7/ new finished track, feedback please?

As above could do with some more sub... the wah noices come in quite high so that it lacks any real bounce or anything so add in way more bass it'll make it heavier....

Looking to get some feed back on "Enter Space" - first one in the player...

Antics

karmacazee · Post by **karmacazee** » Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:20 am

Apathesis wrote:Just put a new tune up,

Hasn't got a name yet, waiting on a certain lady to name it!

Would love to know what dubstepforum thinks

Safe

www.myspace.com/apathesis

I love the it. The kick and the sub are the stuff of envy. I really like the way the vocal seems to bend subtly down every 8 or 16 bars (wasn't actually counting), and it creates this mad little harmony with the delay. As the Fast SHow would say, Niceee......

karmacazee · Post by **karmacazee** » Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:36 am

paravrais wrote:
paravrais wrote:Try to drop some feedback on at least three tunes, otherwise this won't work properly

If every person drops 3 bits of feedback with their submission then everyone would be happy. Don't get why some people are not only too lazy to post comments but too lazy to read the first post of the thread as well!!
EDIT: I've given up on posting my own tunes in this thread...but something still compels me to police it like a flaming pup.

Never give up!

Exquisite dub is awesome, but I reckon the midrange bass could do with more ooomph of some description, or some more swirliness, or something! It sounds... unfinished...

Couldn't find the other tracks you were on about, have you changed their names?

BUT

Invasion is sweet, love the tiny moment of strings, the breakdown, then that second drop with the evilest of midrangey badness.

And where the hell did you get that sample where the guy says 'what the fuck is the universe?'? I know I've heard it from somewhere!

karmacazee · Post by **karmacazee** » Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:43 am

Antics wrote:
dedman wrote:http://www.zshare.net/audio/58875640957033c7/ new finished track, feedback please?

As above could do with some more sub... the wah noices come in quite high so that it lacks any real bounce or anything so add in way more bass it'll make it heavier....

Looking to get some feed back on "Enter Space" - first one in the player...

Antics

I'm only 30 seconds in and I like it. Dark and atmospheric, subtle, yet very danceable!

Sounds like it needs a tad more top end on the snares? Either that or my ears are shot right now :p

Still tho,

karmacazee · Post by **karmacazee** » Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:50 am

jbird22 wrote:New track "Pileup Revisited", first track in player.

Some feedback would be great.

Peace!

You live in a pretty place.

Plus you make cool tunes. I reckon the one you mentioned sounds a bit dry during the first section, sounds like it needs some 'verb. That's about the only criticism I have.

I like the giltchiness tho!

jbird22 · Post by **jbird22** » Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:55 am

Karmacazee wrote:
jbird22 wrote:New track "Pileup Revisited", first track in player.

Some feedback would be great.

Peace!
You live in a pretty place.

Plus you make cool tunes. I reckon the one you mentioned sounds a bit dry during the first section, sounds like it needs some 'verb. That's about the only criticism I have.

I like the giltchiness tho!

Safe dude. Glad u likin my tracks. What do you mean by reverb?.
I mean shall i stick it on like the whole section/drums/lead?

karmacazee · Post by **karmacazee** » Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:55 am

This feedback thing is good fun, and slightly addictive. Just hope my criticisms/advice aren't just bullsh*t!

Anyhoo, here's my latest number. Thought I'd try and do a remix of 'that Moby tune', there was a little competition starting for it on this forum about a week ago but it got 'disappeared'

Would love some feedbag!

Edit: helps if I post the link doesn't it....

http://www.divshare.com/download/7143511-c04

karmacazee · Post by **karmacazee** » Mon Apr 20, 2009 1:03 am

jbird22 wrote:
Karmacazee wrote:
jbird22 wrote:New track "Pileup Revisited", first track in player.

Some feedback would be great.

Peace!
You live in a pretty place.

Plus you make cool tunes. I reckon the one you mentioned sounds a bit dry during the first section, sounds like it needs some 'verb. That's about the only criticism I have.

I like the giltchiness tho!
Safe dude. Glad u likin my tracks. What do you mean by reverb?.
I mean shall i stick it on like the whole section/drums/lead?

I usually stick some reverb on my snare and a little bit on my hats, just to give them some depth. Just a little bit though, as too much will lose the impact of the drums.

I've heard some people put their entire mix through some reverb to make it 'gel' together, but I've personally never tried this and have so can't vouch for this technique!

The more I hear it, the more I like this track tho.
;p

jbird22 · Post by **jbird22** » Mon Apr 20, 2009 1:07 am

Karmacazee wrote:This feedback thing is good fun, and slightly addictive. Just hope my criticisms/advice aren't just bullsh*t!

Anyhoo, here's my latest number. Thought I'd try and do a remix of 'that Moby tune', there was a little competition starting for it on this forum about a week ago but it got 'disappeared'

Would love some feedbag!

Edit: helps if I post the link doesn't it....

http://www.divshare.com/download/7143511-c04

Dont worry bout givin naff feedback coz its all useful (if that make any sense)

Likin your track anyway, got a real nice groove to it & some real nice sub goin on.

jjbutler88 · Post by **jjbutler88** » Mon Apr 20, 2009 4:09 am

Any chance I can get some feedback on a couple of new tunes I made? Very different styles, be sure to check the other out if you dont like one of them.

linkage: http://www.myspace.com/abstraktdubstep

Cheers

manicmckanic · Post by **manicmckanic** » Mon Apr 20, 2009 11:55 am

During the night, something happened:

Manix - Something Happened.mp3

whatcha think so far?

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