A brand new track made by Bun-Zer0

[bunzer0]

This one is called "Microwave" :

http://fwf.gast00n.com/Bun_Zer0_Microwave.mp3

If u have the time to give a listen... and then maybe a feedback ?

[bze]

only drums? where did you put the atmospherics or bass?

to be honest, the only good thing about this song is the part somewhere past 2:30, with the horns etc. take this one apart and rebuild the track.

[pete_bubonic]

SOme nice parts in the track, but I feel it does lack substance, although that bass kick is nice and with the sub it sounds good at about 3 minutes. But the track feels it lacks the gel to hold it together.

[taxidriver]

I like the drums but it seems that you used random sounds over it except for the horns. You could work a bit more and improve the arrangement and add other elements to give coherence to the whole track.