ekay_tomorrow

[eskay]

I have not had time to touch this for many weeks but have just tweaked & Eq'd it a bit.

I would welcome any comments.

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?a ... 36259948C6

eskay

[sgtpilko]

hmm not that keen im afraid. I think the ideas are ok but maybe suffer from the samples you've chosen. The drums sound very real or live, but don't seem to cut through the mix enough, got no power. try layering some other hits and eqing, maybe try compressing a bit too if you haven't already.

the strings seem too high in the mix and started to grate on me after a bit. like the rasta chat and sirens. b-line didn't seem to do much, and although would probably sound v. deep on a big rig hasn't got enough movement/variation for me

hope that didn't sound too bad, fairly constructive etc its all personal taste innit!

[eskay]

cheers man, thanks for listening and taking the time to comment.

i am very new to this game (first tune) so appreciatte the comments. I have a couple of other ideas floating around in my head, so I may pursue those instead.

[username taken]

the drums really and badly need more punch. they're too thin and shy. compress, saturate, eq and compress again. some slight limiting would also do the trick. that aside, the track is pretty nice. i would work on the structure some more tho. dubstep is rather sparse but this tends to get a bit dull on second listen.

add some more stuff. a swoosh, an dely-ed something, a lil melody...