cartunez (breakstep)

caunterstrike · Post by **caunterstrike** » Sat May 09, 2009 2:54 pm

got a new tune up on the myspaz player called cartunez. i am not completely happy with it but its been unfinished for so long and seemed to be going nowhere so i thought i would finish it and post it up here. please let me know what you think preferably about the production quality rather than the creativity but dont keep any comments to your self
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caunterstrike · Post by **caunterstrike** » Sun May 10, 2009 7:29 am

come on. i have only had 5 views i gave more feedback before posting than people have even looked at this post. dont let me down dubs section

loz6789 · Post by **loz6789** » Sun May 10, 2009 12:05 pm

really cool song mate, break at 0.54 is mint.

Before 2.44 i wouldnt have a build up, just let it go straight into the break. I think it would have more impact. just an opinion...

P.S, i have the same prob. I posted my first song last night and not one reply even though 40+ views

fuzz_2k · Post by **fuzz_2k** » Mon May 11, 2009 8:59 am

at work no speakerz

no fear will check it out ina bit!!

fuzz_2k · Post by **fuzz_2k** » Mon May 11, 2009 4:52 pm

the tune as a whole sounds pretty done, i also have this problem with a few tunes! i find it best to finish it and start on the next 1. If your really stuck try and do a remix of it! some times that can do wonders for a tune

mole · Post by **mole** » Tue May 12, 2009 2:32 pm

Feelin' the garagy/breaky tip. lovin the wobbly fall in it>> well jokes!
Good work, perhaps some vocals would go well, obscure sample type stuff.nice one.
MoLey

caunterstrike · Post by **caunterstrike** » Wed May 13, 2009 11:16 pm

thanks for the feedback so far. keep it coming. it all helps

g_fo · Post by **g_fo** » Thu May 14, 2009 2:24 am

like the garage-y style breakz init.

maybe shorten interlude at 2:40 or so... but now i'm just being picky!

really, its good dude... "hourglass" is good 1 to have too. good work.

caunterstrike · Post by **caunterstrike** » Fri May 15, 2009 10:04 am

cheers guys. not to sure why you think it sounds garagey it wasnt supposed to but it seems to work anyway. thanks for the advice

cartunez (breakstep)

cartunez (breakstep)

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