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vermin · Post by **vermin** » Sat Jun 06, 2009 5:39 pm

Yo, posted this in the dubs section but people are SLEEPING over there.
Anyways, posting this here for some real feedback, cuz this tune is intresting as hell. Give it a chance, you just might love it.
Deep, downtempo, breakstepy, rolling tune with good progression.
Check it @ http://soundcloud.com/brewmak/fatal-fury-your-eyes

Chees lads!

altered state · Post by **altered state** » Sat Jun 06, 2009 5:46 pm

Didnt get any feedback here last time but nevertheless ill try again...

new tune, titled "anger" on the player.

Old school minimal vibes and percussion.

http://www.myspace.com/imaginaryforcesdub

mr bastard · Post by **mr bastard** » Mon Jun 08, 2009 12:11 am

only just found this......wasteman.....check out these flamers....

http://soundcloud.com/ollie-1/the-proxy ... -noize-rmx

messdup · Post by **messdup** » Mon Jun 08, 2009 8:59 am

just started to produce
if anybody would give me some feedback on my first track in my player, would be cool & helpfull

www.myspace.com/mezzdub

pess86 · Post by **pess86** » Mon Jun 08, 2009 11:08 am

Messdup wrote:just started to produce
if anybody would give me some feedback on my first track in my player, would be cool & helpfull

www.myspace.com/mezzdub

sounds good..nice and chilled out.

my only complaint is i got tired listening to the hi hat sound layered over the snare....

maybe a clap or other sound might be better suited. .

dont mean to be harsh..

P -

messdup · Post by **messdup** » Mon Jun 08, 2009 12:22 pm

a friend of mine said the same
so gonna work on it & try to make the snare come more out
thx for feedback

tripwire22 · Post by **tripwire22** » Mon Jun 08, 2009 3:45 pm

new song up more darker than my usual plz comment

www.myspace.com/trpwr

tezifon · Post by **tezifon** » Mon Jun 08, 2009 4:17 pm

my last production, need some suggestions thx

http://soundcloud.com/tezi/majo-ding-dong-ditch

tezifon · Post by **tezifon** » Mon Jun 08, 2009 4:24 pm

Tripwire22 wrote:new song up more darker than my usual plz comment

www.myspace.com/trpwr

do it longer its too short ¡¡ try 2 drumsets

tripwire22 · Post by **tripwire22** » Mon Jun 08, 2009 4:38 pm

lol i never thought about length but i cant cuz i make all my songs on a demo of Fl studio so i cant save but ill make my next song longer

megaladon · Post by **megaladon** » Mon Jun 08, 2009 7:11 pm

@ wheezie- nice and moody is my first thought (that dramamine track.) I like, nothing jumps out at you though, maybe it's the intention that it's not quite ambient and non quite a raver (?) That click I've got to say sounds familiar, some pretty simple jiggery with it could keep that continuity there without it getting annoying through the whole track.

The wobbler is, well, a wobbler. I'm sure it would move you in a club but it's missing the soul of that first track that I like

@ Snare Bear- it just doesn't feel like a song, it's too long and windy and the samples just don't fit with the feel of it at all. I don't mean that 6 minutes is too long for a track, but it seems to turn into a bit of blur. That's just me being harsh there beause a lot of the actual sounds and ideas in there are really good. The mod fx are used quite well but there's not enough power in the drums/bass, and it doesn't suit omedy soundbites beause it's got a good sombre feel to it anyway.

@ Toonsupersound- nice tune. I like the gritty effects thrown in there. You need to shake the beat up though, I don't think you need particularly loud hats/shakers/rides or anything in there but you need to mix it up. The actualy bassline is really good but needs some variation under it. Listening through a few pages of stuff on here, people need to remember it's ok to move the kick and snare from beats 1 and 3.

@ Rinseone- pretty decent, a bit more movement in the percussion perhaps? I think it just needs a (counter)melody when it drops a bit, it's got a good bass but needs something in a higher register. Bad points I'd just say the intervals aren't too imaginitive in the tune (hardly a big thing in dubstep) but that intro kick pattern is just way too standard now. Keep with this one though.

@ Brewmak- yeah really like this, I'm not sure what to add as it sounds pretty finished. Just try to pump the most out of it as you can. The intro sounds a bit too 'intro-y' if that makes any sense, just a little obvious maybe.

Is that your desription of the track by the way? I don't mean to sound like a tnuc here (and this isn't just aimed at you) but there seems to be a lot of people on here seriously bigging themselves up 'listen to this filthy tune' etc. which I find pretty offputting. I realise yours isn't like that, I just find it odd to state how interesting your own track is

(as ChrisH said- can't get your tunes to work btw- this is all meant to be onstructive, not having a go)

@ 54- I really liked all of that. I just listened to all of it but kind of monged out, so no advie sorry but that must be a good sign at least

@ tripwire- That new tune is pretty sharp (the clap on illumination though... stay away)

I've tired myself out now writing these.

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Mon Jun 08, 2009 7:48 pm

myspace.com/blindprophet01

I just finished a 7 song EP and I've put three demos up on my myspace page... I'd appreciate if ya'll could listen to them and let me know what you think.

sorry for posting this same request in the production forum without doing so here first, I'm really blind - hence the name.

thanks ya'll!

megaladon · Post by **megaladon** » Tue Jun 09, 2009 3:59 pm

I don't know if you've actually posted it yet but to diverse onepts, I love that 4 by 4 track. I get that the 4 x 4 kick is the whole oncept, but a bit of mixing up the kick patterns in the middle section and that is a tune I really would love.

diverseconcepts · Post by **diverseconcepts** » Tue Jun 09, 2009 6:24 pm

Well if your meant to stick beats in here, at least take away the 'new topic' thingy and just have the 'new subject' tab on here...

Anyways,

www.myspace.com/diverseconcepts1

If you like and want some 320's hit me up via the Myspace and leave your emails...

Pzzz.

diverseconcepts · Post by **diverseconcepts** » Tue Jun 09, 2009 7:08 pm

Megaladon wrote:I don't know if you've actually posted it yet but to diverse onepts, I love that 4 by 4 track. I get that the 4 x 4 kick is the whole oncept, but a bit of mixing up the kick patterns in the middle section and that is a tune I really would love.

Safe man... Theres gonna be a lil mix an mash with that, just waiting on a vocalist tohit me up about doing some live shit over that 1...

Glad you dig kind sir!

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Tue Jun 09, 2009 7:22 pm

I'd really like to know what you guys think of my tunes, please hit up my myspace!

megaladon · Post by **megaladon** » Tue Jun 09, 2009 11:30 pm

Dignan wrote:I'd really like to know what you guys think of my tunes, please hit up my myspace!

Try giving other people some feedback and they might reciprocate.

messdup · Post by **messdup** » Wed Jun 10, 2009 8:35 am

thx for checking my track megaladon!

djerkov · Post by **djerkov** » Wed Jun 10, 2009 12:48 pm

DiverseConcepts- Not really into ambient stuff much, but Idle Hands really gets going nicely! Broken has some nice chesty bass in it though for sure! Maybe a bit loud in the mix i think though. 4x4 is quality.

Dignan - Again with the ambience! Totally listenable though , maybe needs more sub. But then again what doesn't! Also, i don't think the drums cut through in the mix.

Don't really feel like i'm qualified to judge these, as it's not really my scene!

Check mine out if you really would like to.

www.myspace.com/geochelone

Its a bit more rude-boy than yous guyses though!

swifteemusic · Post by **swifteemusic** » Wed Jun 10, 2009 1:26 pm

WWW.MYSPACE.COM/SWIFTEE06 Some feedback would be nice, getting released in the near future on Bass Punch, Its the first track entitled
'How To Slap A Man'

bless

swiftee

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