"4 to the Core" 320 pon request.

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brasilico1
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"4 to the Core" 320 pon request.

Post by brasilico1 » Sun Jun 28, 2009 10:51 pm

any feedback would be appreciated as per usual.

www.myspace.com/brasilico1

1st track " 4 to the core"

Big up everyone that has left feedback so far on my tracks, thats not many, but still, im new!!!

safe.
Last edited by brasilico1 on Mon Jun 29, 2009 3:13 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by the lemon pharma » Mon Jun 29, 2009 1:27 am

's'up Brasilico...
1st off ur linky ain't workin...missin an 'i'
http://www.myspace.com/brasilico1 would be the right one ;)

It's a pretty cool track, just sounds unfinished imo. Maybe it needs more to it, it just seems to me the 4/4 beat n a bassline thru a lot of the tune. Possibly chucking in some of that nice piano bit sliced up and delaying in the tune itself would be cool. But u may be going for that minimal effect huh?
You got some progression in there, which i like, and usually find a lot of dubstep tunes need more of.
I like the vibe in that intro... it just doesn't quite deliver for me on the drop, that goes for the second one also. But that's only a matter of opinion... Still... nice tune man!
Oh yeah, i like the lil amen breaks u got in there also ;)

brasilico1
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Post by brasilico1 » Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:41 pm

yeah, i think your right actually. it is suopposed to be minimal but i think its a little too bare. Am gona fix it up!!!

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