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vice · Post by **vice** » Thu Jul 16, 2009 8:57 pm

sorry for the repost. here is my soundcloud I changed the song little bit. tell me what you think

thanks.

(my first post in this topic was very fast and I couldnt write anything sorry again)

http://soundcloud.com/vice3

reignstep · Post by **reignstep** » Thu Jul 16, 2009 9:55 pm

- mail1234: chill out with the wobbles, you don't have to pump dubstep full of wobbles to make it dubstep

also work on your drums, they seem a bit off at times.

Vice wrote:sorry for the repost. here is my soundcloud I changed the song little bit. tell me what you think thanks.

(my first post in this topic was very fast and I couldnt write anything sorry again)

http://soundcloud.com/vice3

Sounds like a brutal electro patch there

it's ok for a start but the mastering's not the best and the intro isn't great either. I like the drop and all that follows though

new project of mine, thought I'd go back to the dark and heavy dubstep

http://soundcloud.com/reignex/new-project

m12 · Post by **m12** » Thu Jul 16, 2009 10:56 pm

My first attempt at dubstep really.. Was wicked fun to make, so just seeing what any reactions are to people more used to listening to dubstep.

A trancey / melodic style thing.

Clip here:

http://www.mediafire.com/?lmkol0g3iin

320 available to anyone who wants it..

Edit:

Its also the first track on this:

http://www.myspace.com/mattengland1985

head transfer · Post by **head transfer** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 10:18 am

Reignz wrote:new project of mine, thought I'd go back to the dark and heavy dubstep

http://soundcloud.com/reignex/new-project

nice sub bass, i like it whith the ringy sound to it

. The orchestral piece in my opinion needs some intro, maybe a small break or a low pass filter intro. great idea though, kind of floaty - carry-me-away-stuff...

I'm remastering my 3xdrop track to cut back on the compression and distortion some, it was kind of over the top wasn't it

I've also changed the bass on the second drop for some variety..
I'll upload when finished...

dansu · Post by **dansu** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 11:54 am

Dansu wrote:so, this tune is basically finished, i just can`t master it well, due to crappy soundsystem, so i`ll just post it here.

http://www.speedyshare.com/149409447.html

hf folks

cum on guys, comment my tune.
you guys seem to know a lot bout the dubbs, listen to mine and comment it pleeze

serox · Post by **serox** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:08 pm

I am at work right now so cannot listen to any of the new tunes posted up but I will do when I am back home in London.

Would appreciate any feedback on this if you can. I have loads more to do with it but not going to be able to sit down. Will change the patterns every 16th/32 and replace some hits with new sounds in places. Only heard on headphones so prob missing sub?

http://soundcloud.com/serox/serox-the-abandoned-base

baba da bass · Post by **baba da bass** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:12 pm

Here's a piece im working on right now.
basically i started with a bass, then added the other stuff that's there right now and after listening a while i liked the rest more than the bass so it got thrown out...

http://uploaded.to/file/zds3yw

now here it is, comment and recommend a bass that would suit it.
thought of a simple sine sub, but i' open to other stuff as well.

lhd · Post by **lhd** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 2:58 pm

@ Dansu- Seriously, were those tears man? I scrolled back all the way to page 33 of this thread, guess how many people's tunes you commented on? NONE. This thread is for people who have an interest in the growth of others as well as themselves, it ain't free production school homey. Join the team and be a team player or stop crying about not getting put in the game. I would be happy to listen to joint but I hate posts that link me to a download site b/c I hate all that clutter on my comp. Get a soundcloud page and post on there pr a myspace page and I'll listen then, and be a friend to have one man, that's old news. Peace.

http://soundcloud.com

head transfer · Post by **head transfer** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 3:37 pm

Serox wrote:I am at work right now so cannot listen to any of the new tunes posted up but I will do when I am back home in London.

Would appreciate any feedback on this if you can. I have loads more to do with it but not going to be able to sit down. Will change the patterns every 16th/32 and replace some hits with new sounds in places. Only heard on headphones so prob missing sub?

http://soundcloud.com/serox/serox-the-abandoned-base

without to much blabla, here are my suggestions (no obligations

)
The first hat to enter sounds pretty standard, like the ones on old drum synths of the standard dance hat in FL

The bass is really nice but i think if you'll listen on monitors or good speakers, you will find it needs remastering (sounds like youtube quality or something :p) but i guess this is what work in progress means right...

nice percussion going on!
Keep working on it and I think it'll end up real nice, or creepy

btw i edited my 3xdrop track on soundcloud, now under the name '3xdrop 2' (http://soundcloud.com/head-transfer/3xdrop-2) is this an improvement?

dansu · Post by **dansu** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 3:42 pm

lol sorry, i`ll try to involve myself more into the community in future.

@this link you can stream the song
Dschinn.mp3 - 6.71MB

sry for bad behaviour etc :>

lhd · Post by **lhd** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 3:55 pm

@ Dansu- All good homey, my first post on the production forum was in all caps.

serox · Post by **serox** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 4:04 pm

Head Transfer wrote:
Serox wrote:I am at work right now so cannot listen to any of the new tunes posted up but I will do when I am back home in London.

Would appreciate any feedback on this if you can. I have loads more to do with it but not going to be able to sit down. Will change the patterns every 16th/32 and replace some hits with new sounds in places. Only heard on headphones so prob missing sub?

http://soundcloud.com/serox/serox-the-abandoned-base
without to much blabla, here are my suggestions (no obligations )
The first hat to enter sounds pretty standard, like the ones on old drum synths of the standard dance hat in FL
The bass is really nice but i think if you'll listen on monitors or good speakers, you will find it needs remastering (sounds like youtube quality or something :p) but i guess this is what work in progress means right...
nice percussion going on!
Keep working on it and I think it'll end up real nice, or creepy

btw i edited my 3xdrop track on soundcloud, now under the name '3xdrop 2' (http://soundcloud.com/head-transfer/3xdrop-2) is this an improvement?

Thanks for listening! I love 808/909 drums

I cannot hear what you mean with the bass:( I guess my monitors/headphones are not up for the job. What is the problem exactly if you can describe? no one else has mentioned it to me.

dansu · Post by **dansu** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 4:18 pm

you know, the problem is that i`m not a native speaker. and though my english-skills arent bad at all, i`m quite shy sometimes, when talking with native speakers.

but i`mma try my best:
Baba da Bass: tune is tight. i would prefer a simple sine-sub, with no attack and no release, since i find those would make the tune more dubby.

HangManDubstep · Post by **HangManDubstep** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 8:15 pm

NEW W.I.P........stayed with the oriental theme....plz enjoy
GIVE FEEDBACK!!!!!!!!!!
The Track is called FLUID KOMBAT
http://www.myspace.com/ruckusdubstep

reignstep · Post by **reignstep** » Fri Jul 17, 2009 10:03 pm

X-Fyah wrote:NEW W.I.P........stayed with the oriental theme....plz enjoy
GIVE FEEDBACK!!!!!!!!!!
The Track is called FLUID KOMBAT
http://www.myspace.com/ruckusdubstep

Well the idea is good but I'm not really digging the sound of the bass , the notes are off at some points, and the song lacks alot of power, though I guess you still have to mix the whole

This one needs abit more working on

ruthyloops · Post by **ruthyloops** » Sat Jul 18, 2009 12:31 am

First time posting in this thread. Heres something I've been working on for the night. there is a clip on my myspace player.- its a soundcloud clip. let me know what you think if you got the time. www.myspace.com/twitch222 peaz

ahaha! ahaha! · Post by **ahaha! ahaha!** » Sat Jul 18, 2009 8:11 am

Start of a new tune im working on, whaddaya think?

EDIT: NEW link - http://www.mediafire.com/?nnmr0iuzdnz

Any feedback much appreciated.

head transfer · Post by **head transfer** » Sat Jul 18, 2009 12:34 pm

Serox wrote:
Head Transfer wrote:
Serox wrote:I am at work right now so cannot listen to any of the new tunes posted up but I will do when I am back home in London.

Would appreciate any feedback on this if you can. I have loads more to do with it but not going to be able to sit down. Will change the patterns every 16th/32 and replace some hits with new sounds in places. Only heard on headphones so prob missing sub?

http://soundcloud.com/serox/serox-the-abandoned-base
without to much blabla, here are my suggestions (no obligations )
The first hat to enter sounds pretty standard, like the ones on old drum synths of the standard dance hat in FL
The bass is really nice but i think if you'll listen on monitors or good speakers, you will find it needs remastering (sounds like youtube quality or something :p) but i guess this is what work in progress means right...
nice percussion going on!
Keep working on it and I think it'll end up real nice, or creepy

btw i edited my 3xdrop track on soundcloud, now under the name '3xdrop 2' (http://soundcloud.com/head-transfer/3xdrop-2) is this an improvement?
Thanks for listening! I love 808/909 drums

I cannot hear what you mean with the bass:( I guess my monitors/headphones are not up for the job. What is the problem exactly if you can describe? no one else has mentioned it to me.

ok, i thought you were just being lazy and putting in standard sounds

but if you want that sound, i guess that's just your style

(to me) the bass sounds like you pumped up the lower frequencies without considering the higher ones, wich gives it a sort of damped sound. It could just be me though, it was just my first impression...

but really, nice song. keep it up, I didn't want to put you down or anything

koo · Post by **koo** » Sat Jul 18, 2009 4:34 pm

http://soundcloud.com/kooma/speed-2

One of the first attempts to make any kind of music from me. Made it in FL.
Looked at the waveform in soundcloud and looks like it seriously needs some mixing.

Bash it, would be nice to know what's good place to start improving.

soupdogg · Post by **soupdogg** » Sat Jul 18, 2009 5:36 pm

Koo wrote:http://soundcloud.com/kooma/speed-2
Bash it, would be nice to know what's good place to start improving.

Ditch the chiptune shit it gave me a headache, tighten up the drums, make them crisper, sharper. the bassline sounds like it was meant for a completely different track, and is very flat.

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