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hurlingdervish · Post by **hurlingdervish** » Sat Jul 25, 2009 3:29 pm

Von Goochenburg wrote:Hello

Here's some tracks I've been working on:

http://www.myspace.com/goochenburg

feedback appreciated.

i really like maybe maybe

you kind of got a kraftwerk thing going on

the hangdrum sounds in tortoise are cool

ianfm · Post by **ianfm** » Sat Jul 25, 2009 6:19 pm

hurlingdervish wrote:@ IanFM

what do you mean the first part of the song, not the intro right but the "drop"?

That generally means the bassline coming in, my tracks are made in Logic.

@ Von Goochenburg There's a bit of an issue with the first track on your myspace. When you have a straight sinewave like that, mixed in at that mid-rage, it's really gonna hurt people's ears once played on a larger system. Needs to be lower, or something.

B_90 · Post by **B_90** » Sun Jul 26, 2009 9:20 pm

My tune War of the worlds needs loads of work but i got writers block any suggestions?

www.reverbnation.com/b90

bugsky · Post by **bugsky** » Sun Jul 26, 2009 9:50 pm

Neurotik wrote:http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?idmirttmqjn

I'm digging the ambience of the intro. That kick is tastey. I'm getting a Burial vipe, for sure.
Those samples sound fine to me, by the way.
This is a nice beginning mate. You should continue with it. I suggest adding a soft lead ontop. Maybe also bring some strings into play, to complement the pads you already have.

B-90 wrote:My tune War of the worlds needs loads of work but i got writers block any suggestions?

www.reverbnation.com/b90

Firstly, check your levels dude. Im hearing clipping left, right and centre.
I like what your doing tho. I suggest bringing down the delay on the synths a tad bit, because its making everything mush together too much. Maybe get that sub to be more punchy later on, along with a new synth to coincide with it. You could also use those vocal samples later on to add to the beat, if you are feeling experimental.

I've got a track ive made a start on up on my myspace, called Aural Delight:

http://www.myspace.com/bugsky

I've spent a day workin on this, so feed would be awesome.

Safe

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Sun Jul 26, 2009 9:57 pm

http://soundcloud.com/blind-prophet/whi ... unfinished

Help! I've literally hit a wall with this one, suggestions on where it should go, etc. are appreciated! thanks!!

86. · Post by **86.** » Mon Jul 27, 2009 3:12 pm

jbird22 wrote:"Breaking Skulls".
New track up on the old myspace an SoundCloud
Some feedback would b great.
Cheers

only thing I'd say is to butter up the piano bit at the end, like some more delay or reverb or something

but I definitely like the vibe man, can't go wrong with hip hop flavour

sorry i'm not being extensive....but that's my take on it

86. · Post by **86.** » Mon Jul 27, 2009 3:20 pm

LHD wrote:Alright, got a mostly complete version of this new tune I been workin on posted on my soundcloud, pretty summery, dancey vibes, definitely a deep tune so if all you like is wobble don't even listen to it 'cause I don't wanna hear you tell me to add a wobble. Apart from that all feedback is appreciated, you will need to turn up your monitors a bit b/c there's some headroom in the tune still, and unfortunately, my CPU is at the max that it can handle so I'm kinda stuck on doing too much to this joint until I get a new comp. First one on the page, called Good Feelins.

this tune is deep man. chilled out vibes. it'd be especially ill if the drums banged out a lil bit more.

waitin fa daddy is real slick too. I like being able to catch vibes off of chill tunes like these.

sick stuff!

lhd · Post by **lhd** » Mon Jul 27, 2009 11:19 pm

@86-Word, thanks for listening homey. I'm still workin on Good fEelins anfd it's totally different now than the version you heard. I'll post a newer version soon. big up!

pk- · Post by **pk-** » Tue Jul 28, 2009 1:40 am

http://www.pjpk.net/music/yawn.mp3

bit tired

minifletch · Post by **minifletch** » Tue Jul 28, 2009 2:25 am

Heres my contribution to this thread

http://www.zshare.net/audio/6325774066188ce1/

Bare in mind this is my 1st dubstep track that i fort was worth puttin out, iv been workin on my sound for a while now

but yeh, feedback wud be great

thankz

lhd · Post by **lhd** » Tue Jul 28, 2009 4:24 am

Newer version of my Good Feelins tune up on the soundcloud. I'm feelin really close to finished with this tune, but for some reason it's just not seeming to come together for me anymore so I'm going back to work on a coupla different tunes. Any arrangement or structure crit is appreciated. The mix is not final so the tune is a bit low volume as I've left some headroom. Most of my levels are (imo) pretty right on. Not sure why I'm not so happy with this tune anymore. A week ago I fuckin loved it!

thierry_le_dj · Post by **thierry_le_dj** » Tue Jul 28, 2009 6:50 am

may i plzzzzzzzzzzz get a feed back on (Safari Dub and Feeling It)
plzzzzzzzzzzzz
http://www.myspace.com/thierryledj
thanks
Thierry

ianfm · Post by **ianfm** » Tue Jul 28, 2009 7:37 am

Thierry_Le_Dj wrote:may i plzzzzzzzzzzz get a feed back on (Safari Dub and Feeling It)
plzzzzzzzzzzzz
http://www.myspace.com/thierryledj
thanks
Thierry

For Safari Dub the production is good, no problems there really. It's just really dry and not unique, the animal noises aren't really good ambiance, or musical for the most part and they last way too long at the start (even chainsaw calligraphy does take that much time). Feeling It is a bit better in terms of the intro, but once the drop comes it really just turns into the exact same thing as Safari Dub. Think you need to change it up a bit.

new ting:

edit: redid the arrangement/bass
http://dl-client.getdropbox.com/u/71572 ... un%202.mp3

j_one · Post by **j_one** » Tue Jul 28, 2009 11:52 pm

Spent a couple hours on this earlier, very rough mix. Will check out some tracks in a bit for crit.

http://www.mediafire.com/file/nztzgynmc ... tepper.mp3

Cheers!

rapsag111 · Post by **rapsag111** » Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:21 am

K this is my best so far, but i want some feedback! tear it apart!
http://soundcloud.com/rapsag/dubmaster-deluxe

cataphract · Post by **cataphract** » Wed Jul 29, 2009 11:47 am

something i started...

http://soundcloud.com/cataphract/fiddle

<ding> · Post by **<ding>** » Wed Jul 29, 2009 1:10 pm

my new work in progress

whosabadman

need some feedback on chords and timbre of brass
not quite feelin it yet tbh

badmanforumtry.mp3 - 9.27MB

reignstep · Post by **reignstep** » Wed Jul 29, 2009 1:37 pm

cataphract wrote:something i started...

http://soundcloud.com/cataphract/fiddle

I love the sound of your sub, but I think the lead needs some spacing out, more effects to make it sound less dry. Off for a cool track, cool use of drums I'd like to see more of this

I'm working on an old idea I worked out a while ago, this is how it sounds now:

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/259728

more of a laidback song really ^^

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