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trike12 · Post by **trike12** » Fri Aug 14, 2009 4:37 pm

New dub,
Analog truth!

Check it
would really really appreciate some feedback on this one.

http://soundcloud.com/triky12/analog-truth

ledew drugis · Post by **ledew drugis** » Fri Aug 14, 2009 10:42 pm

been toying with music for like half a year now

I like many bpms

got a couple of my tracks up now

my two new tracks here are not completely finished but heck what ya think?

Drugis - The High End Feast*NEW*
Drugis - Magma Drops *NEW*

http://soundcloud.com/drugis

stinjee · Post by **stinjee** » Sat Aug 15, 2009 11:07 am

got 4 new tunes on my virb, click the sig n let me know wot u think really need constructive critism man,

peace

Sinus Sawtooth · Post by **Sinus Sawtooth** » Sat Aug 15, 2009 12:18 pm

After crashing FL instances, corrupt ram, corrupt files, crashing synths we finally finished this tune filled with subsamuraininjairabbits.

http://soundcloud.com/sinussawtooth/kai ... ms-of-doom

feedback is apreciated

p.s. first track finished after YEARS

magnetron_sputtering · Post by **magnetron_sputtering** » Sat Aug 15, 2009 1:50 pm

Hey Trike, that tune sounds pretty good. The production on it seem well done to me anyway. If I had to make a criticism I'd say that may it's all a little too busy. There's a lot of atmospherics and stuff in there. Maybe a simpler sound might work better for it.

Listening to Stinjee there too. Some cool stuff going on in the basslines but some of the synth sounds are a bit umm preset-ish or something? I think you could do something with the drums too. They don't really cut through and give the kick the leads are calling for. Some cool samples in there though.

OK here's mine. Four of the better ones anyway. I don't think they're even really dubstep (definitely not Stomping Around The Place anyway) but you guys know yer shit and I'd like to hear what yiz think!!

http://soundcloud.com/comrade-pig

trike12 · Post by **trike12** » Sat Aug 15, 2009 11:29 pm

Magnetron, Sputtering wrote:Hey Trike, that tune sounds pretty good. The production on it seem well done to me anyway. If I had to make a criticism I'd say that may it's all a little too busy. There's a lot of atmospherics and stuff in there. Maybe a simpler sound might work better for it.

Listening to Stinjee there too. Some cool stuff going on in the basslines but some of the synth sounds are a bit umm preset-ish or something? I think you could do something with the drums too. They don't really cut through and give the kick the leads are calling for. Some cool samples in there though.

OK here's mine. Four of the better ones anyway. I don't think they're even really dubstep (definitely not Stomping Around The Place anyway) but you guys know yer shit and I'd like to hear what yiz think!!

http://soundcloud.com/comrade-pig

actually didnt use any preset but pure white noise from albino.
yeah the drums are pretty weak. working on getting the drums to cut through.

thanks for the criticism!

ill comment on some of your tunes when i have more time.

stinjee · Post by **stinjee** » Sun Aug 16, 2009 12:13 am

Magnetron, Sputtering

production sounds pretty tight man,
id like to hear a bit more energy, but maybe thats just me i like more fast paced jump up stuff,

my favorite one has gotta be the bunday one,

safe for the feed back on my beats man, some of the synth sound are moddified from a preset, lazy maybe,lol
maybe il redo the compression on the drums and look into some more eq.

knobgoblin · Post by **knobgoblin** » Sun Aug 16, 2009 12:35 am

I've a new one up on virb and myspaz called Shedding Moon. Super minimal and atmospheric. Might need some more bass variations...

Also done at 87 BPM

Anyway let me know what you think of my new sound. Im in the middle of a move right now so will listen and give feedback in a few days.

heidi m. · Post by **heidi m.** » Sun Aug 16, 2009 10:28 am

KnobGoblin wrote:I've a new one up on virb and myspaz called Shedding Moon. Super minimal and atmospheric. Might need some more bass variations...

Also done at 87 BPM

Anyway let me know what you think of my new sound. Im in the middle of a move right now so will listen and give feedback in a few days.

This is wicked. V. filmic and spooky, i was imagining all sorts listening to this!

magnetron_sputtering · Post by **magnetron_sputtering** » Sun Aug 16, 2009 1:28 pm

KnobGoblin wrote:I've a new one up on virb and myspaz called Shedding Moon. Super minimal and atmospheric. Might need some more bass variations...

Also done at 87 BPM

Anyway let me know what you think of my new sound. Im in the middle of a move right now so will listen and give feedback in a few days.

A helicopter flew over the house as I was listening to that and for a couple of seconds I didn't realise and thought the tune was going to drop! Sounds great!

trike12 · Post by **trike12** » Sun Aug 16, 2009 1:59 pm

trike12 wrote:
Magnetron, Sputtering wrote:Hey Trike, that tune sounds pretty good. The production on it seem well done to me anyway. If I had to make a criticism I'd say that may it's all a little too busy. There's a lot of atmospherics and stuff in there. Maybe a simpler sound might work better for it.

Listening to Stinjee there too. Some cool stuff going on in the basslines but some of the synth sounds are a bit umm preset-ish or something? I think you could do something with the drums too. They don't really cut through and give the kick the leads are calling for. Some cool samples in there though.

OK here's mine. Four of the better ones anyway. I don't think they're even really dubstep (definitely not Stomping Around The Place anyway) but you guys know yer shit and I'd like to hear what yiz think!!

http://soundcloud.com/comrade-pig

actually didnt use any preset but pure white noise from albino.
yeah the drums are pretty weak. working on getting the drums to cut through.

thanks for the criticism!

ill comment on some of your tunes when i have more time.

misunderstood.. thought your comment on stinjees tunes was for me.

allways interesting to listen to dubstep not going the same 140 bpm.
some of your tunes got that hiphop feel to them, ive allways liked that.
some good ideas in much of it but i think some of your tunes lack a little power, if you havent allready, try to look the thread over about mixing and mastering.

trike12 · Post by **trike12** » Sun Aug 16, 2009 2:39 pm

roodbwoy wrote:After crashing FL instances, corrupt ram, corrupt files, crashing synths we finally finished this tune filled with subsamuraininjairabbits.

http://soundcloud.com/sinussawtooth/kai ... ms-of-doom

feedback is apreciated

p.s. first track finished after YEARS

Thats a very good tune! great orchestral sounds, great bass sound, good variation, good samples! very well produced!

would really like a 320 of this.

lhd · Post by **lhd** » Sun Aug 16, 2009 5:09 pm

New tune
Good Feelins(Bad Heart Mix)

http://soundcloud.com/lhd

Will feedback on the first five peoples' tunes who feedback on mine.

safe.

psy:am · Post by **psy:am** » Sun Aug 16, 2009 5:52 pm

New tune up 'London's Broken'

www.soundcloud.com/psy-am

Would appreciate all feedback on this one and any others and ill feedback as many as possible.

Cheers

psy:am · Post by **psy:am** » Sun Aug 16, 2009 5:55 pm

roodbwoy wrote:After crashing FL instances, corrupt ram, corrupt files, crashing synths we finally finished this tune filled with subsamuraininjairabbits.

http://soundcloud.com/sinussawtooth/kai ... ms-of-doom

feedback is apreciated

p.s. first track finished after YEARS

Really like the track. Good buildup, thats a nice bass sound, and you also have a good variety of other sounds. A generally well produced track!

aspect-dubz · Post by **aspect-dubz** » Mon Aug 17, 2009 1:26 am

i've been tweaking around with synths and what not, but finally produced a breaky kinda dubstep track, would love some feedback if possible, it's the top track on my soundcloud located in the sig, thanks!

2nd chance · Post by **2nd chance** » Mon Aug 17, 2009 7:33 am

LHD wrote:New tune
Good Feelins(Bad Heart Mix)

http://soundcloud.com/lhd

Will feedback on the first five peoples' tunes who feedback on mine.

safe.

Starting where I always do: drums. Fuckin' ace. Very tight, never dull, and that kick is amazing. I might drop the snare pitch down a little, but that's just my taste. I was never one for high snares.

Bass: Overall, hell yes. About the middle, I can't make a lotta bass out... If it's not there, put it, if it is, blame my shitty speakers. haha.

Synths are beautiful and lovely, don't change a thing!

One last thing I feel should be mentioned is your effects. You use 'em really well, keeps the track moving and from getting repetitive. Respect bro.

If ya wanna crit mine, I got a work in progress in that thread, I'd appreciate some feedback on that, but no worries!

Sinus Sawtooth · Post by **Sinus Sawtooth** » Mon Aug 17, 2009 9:00 am

LHD wrote:New tune
Good Feelins(Bad Heart Mix)

http://soundcloud.com/lhd

Will feedback on the first five peoples' tunes who feedback on mine.

safe.

Nice track, really mellow, ultimate stonertune... around 2:45 you should should build some variations to spice it up imo, but overall good track. Drums are tight, bass is deep, and I really like the spooky synth!

Sinus Sawtooth · Post by **Sinus Sawtooth** » Mon Aug 17, 2009 9:14 am

Psy:am wrote:New tune up 'London's Broken'

www.soundcloud.com/psy-am

Would appreciate all feedback on this one and any others and ill feedback as many as possible.

Cheers

yo man! I definitly dig that eerie vibe you're setting there, very creative work with the vocal. Drums are tight though I miss some variation, maybe some dub delayed snare once in a while, only comment is that it's getting a tad to repetitive, so maybe you should put that part at 5m05s earlier in the track and build it out,,..

Sinus Sawtooth · Post by **Sinus Sawtooth** » Mon Aug 17, 2009 9:20 am

trike12 wrote:New dub,
Analog truth!

Check it
would really really appreciate some feedback on this one.

http://soundcloud.com/triky12/analog-truth

fuck man, dunno what to say, that track rocks man! seriously very creative, love the bass!!!

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