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futures_untold · Post by **futures_untold** » Wed Aug 26, 2009 3:45 am

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mistiq · Post by **mistiq** » Wed Aug 26, 2009 5:56 pm

Hi

I'm new here, so i thought i should put a song on the forum! any comments, tips, tricks or whatever are welcome!

http://soundcloud.com/mistiq/bad-karma-1

miretz · Post by **miretz** » Wed Aug 26, 2009 7:04 pm

currently working on this one:

http://www.sendspace.com/file/8xw60m

Let me know what you think!

btw I use Reason 4

pets bud · Post by **pets bud** » Thu Aug 27, 2009 1:52 am

Can anyone give me feedback on this cut. I was in weird mood when I made it or remixed it actually. Just want to hear what people have to say about the idea. If it works or not.

http://soundcloud.com/frostekz/maria-3

mistiq · Post by **mistiq** » Thu Aug 27, 2009 12:44 pm

petS buD wrote:Can anyone give me feedback on this cut. I was in weird mood when I made it or remixed it actually. Just want to hear what people have to say about the idea. If it works or not.

it's ok to say u were stoned or whatever!!

mikeknight123 · Post by **mikeknight123** » Thu Aug 27, 2009 5:21 pm

yeh this is the first song ive ever produced so please be gentle

http://www.zshare.net/audio/64739248d6c8edb1/

im not 100% happy with the mixdown yet so some tips would be appreciated!

got some fun samurai samples in there

sub7 · Post by **sub7** » Thu Aug 27, 2009 7:34 pm

Legendary wrote:http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/special-kinda-vibe-wip

I will give feedback to anyone who gives me feedback as standard.

possibly add a soft synth pad in underneath the piano at the beginning of a 16 bar loop somewhere in the middle of the track, just to breath a bit of extra life into the track. I know you have the one errie synth going in the back ground, just think a soft pad fits this kind of track....

Mind you, this is just a suggestion, I think it progresses very nicely and gets pretty deep man.....cheers...

mikeknight123 · Post by **mikeknight123** » Thu Aug 27, 2009 10:43 pm

Neurotik wrote:
mikeknight123 wrote:yeh this is the first song ive ever produced so please be gentle

http://www.zshare.net/audio/64739248d6c8edb1/

im not 100% happy with the mixdown yet so some tips would be appreciated!

got some fun samurai samples in there
Niice, my initial thoughts were maybe experimenting with a few more breaks in the intro, and layering the kicks, and maybe the snare more to give it that harder hit. Other than that i really like what you've done here . The samples are very nice and put to great use and the bass is fucking sinister . I loved the drop at 1:48!

Thanks a lot mate i appreciate the advice. The kick isn't quite as punchy as i would like. Right now i have 2 kicks one deeper one and one punchy one so i think if i just raise the punchy one in the mix a bit.

And yeh that drop is my favourite part

hurlingdervish · Post by **hurlingdervish** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 12:56 am

Yo i need some ideas on this track

http://www.box.net/shared/pl4kg6jydx

i know theres no build to the drop...gotta do that

but what else?

much appreciated.

ylem · Post by **ylem** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:23 am

@hurling

maybe you could strip it back a little and create some anticipation by introducing your melodies in little bits before everything comes in. Have a listen to just your sub/bassy bits and drums, where there is space put a melodic lick in there... And with the drums maybe you could bring those extra snare hits in gradually, til you've got all your bits bouncing off each other.

but seriously mate, i wouldn't do too much different to it, nice track.

hurlingdervish · Post by **hurlingdervish** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:26 am

ylem wrote:@hurling

maybe you could strip it back a little and create some anticipation by introducing your melodies in little bits before everything comes in. Have a listen to just your sub/bassy bits and drums, where there is space put a melodic lick in there... And with the drums maybe you could bring those extra snare hits in gradually, til you've got all your bits bouncing off each other.

but seriously mate, i wouldn't do too much different to it, nice track.

great advice man!
thanks alot

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 3:25 am

Just put a new preview up on my soundcloud, it's the first tune I've worked on since all my others got deleted (still working on recovering them though, should be done soon), hence the title of the tune. anyway - feedback would be greatly appreciated, thanks ya'll.

peace

theartfulbadger · Post by **theartfulbadger** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 10:48 am

let me just say i'm pretty new to all of this.

criticism welcome.

http://soundcloud.com/the-artful-badger ... unfinished

gnome · Post by **gnome** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:57 pm

A track that I'm not quite sure is up to scratch what do you think? It contains back to the future samples

http://soundcloud.com/gnome-gnome/hello-past

manray · Post by **manray** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 2:10 pm

You lots are waste gave bare feedback. Don't you know about manners.

gnome · Post by **gnome** » Fri Aug 28, 2009 2:23 pm

Neurotik wrote:
Gnome wrote:A track that I'm not quite sure is up to scratch what do you think? It contains back to the future samples

http://soundcloud.com/gnome-gnome/hello-past
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How silly of me. The top track btw. Apologies here:
http://soundcloud.com/gnome-gnome

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BAD KARMA

baah it got deleted before for some reason.

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