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gnome · Post by **gnome** » Sat Aug 29, 2009 8:06 pm

A little stuck on this new song I don't know if there should be more instrumentation or more variety. Links in the SIG the tracks called "shawinkle"
thanks

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:27 am

Gnome wrote:A little stuck on this new song I don't know if there should be more instrumentation or more variety. Links in the SIG the tracks called "shawinkle"
thanks

I'd cut that intro in half, it's a bit too repetative. your kick and snare are sounding good, I'd also recommend adding a little bit more movement to the hi hat once it all kicks in to drive the song a little more.

gnome · Post by **gnome** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:08 pm

Yeah some good ideas thanks for the honest feedback.

theartfulbadger · Post by **theartfulbadger** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:12 pm

theartfulbadger wrote:let me just say i'm pretty new to all of this.

criticism welcome.

http://soundcloud.com/the-artful-badger ... unfinished

got a bit ignored the first time, so let me just ask again for a little bit of criticism/help.

its quite reggae/dub influenced.

thanks guys.

tripwire22 · Post by **tripwire22** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:30 pm

theartfulbadger wrote:
theartfulbadger wrote:let me just say i'm pretty new to all of this.

criticism welcome.

http://soundcloud.com/the-artful-badger ... unfinished
got a bit ignored the first time, so let me just ask again for a little bit of criticism/help.

its quite reggae/dub influenced.

thanks guys.

.
I got you just offer something for my work in progress songs.
i like the song but there is no bass to it at all like no wobbz no sub though this is a work in prog. the intro may be a bit long maybe idk the kicks come in at like a min in thats kinda too long for my tastes

Sinus Sawtooth · Post by **Sinus Sawtooth** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 4:15 pm

viralcode wrote:something iv been working on the past week or so.

heavy basslines, heavy drums, interesting vocal idea...

any feedback appreciated!!

http://rapidshare.com/files/272503705/Ooh_AH.mp3

cheers

I like the vibe man, oohaah vocal ROCKS! Can't hear anything I don't like or anything that sounds out of tune, so finish it and send me the 320!

Sinus Sawtooth · Post by **Sinus Sawtooth** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 4:20 pm

aspect-dubz wrote:hi everybody, could i get some feedback on a tune im calling piecing together, it's still very much a work in progress, also i'll give feedback to whoever gives some in return, safe

http://soundcloud.com/aspect-dubz/piecing-together

yo, I like the tune man, nice mellow/stoner vibe, it's a tad on the boring side right now, maybe you need to make some more variation... subbass is phat!

Sinus Sawtooth · Post by **Sinus Sawtooth** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 4:22 pm

http://soundcloud.com/sinus-sawtooth/si ... n-progress

any comment/feedback? I'm currently struggeling with the bassline, I think it's phat but I have this fear that it's too much

I also think that it's boring but maybe thats because I've heard the track like a million times now since yesterday

tripwire22 · Post by **tripwire22** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 4:33 pm

roodbwoy wrote:http://soundcloud.com/sinus-sawtooth/si ... n-progress

any comment/feedback? I'm currently struggeling with the bassline, I think it's phat but I have this fear that it's too much I also think that it's boring but maybe thats because I've heard the track like a million times now since yesterday

ill give u some feedback cuz its like impossible to get any sometimes. i dont think the bassline is too much its pretty filthy though

i wouldnt say its boring but maybe switch it up if u make the song longer maybe a slower half then bring it back to speed? idk

Dropkick_Kid · Post by **Dropkick_Kid** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 6:12 pm

So I was on youtube earlier in a slight debate over a tune I heard where his synth and the riff were exactly the same as I'd heard on a tutorial so in all fairness I called him a fake

Got a shitload of messages in my inbox on about how I was gay and how I suck and probably can't make a tune so I thought I'd make something for a reply except i forgot what his video was so thought well, maybe, you guys might like to criticize me

Bare in mind it's only my second attempt at a beat, and sorry for the life story lol
Anyway here's the link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q8KTGn36IdQ

Dropkick_Kid · Post by **Dropkick_Kid** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 6:25 pm

roodbwoy wrote:http://soundcloud.com/sinus-sawtooth/si ... n-progress

any comment/feedback? I'm currently struggeling with the bassline, I think it's phat but I have this fear that it's too much I also think that it's boring but maybe thats because I've heard the track like a million times now since yesterday

The intro and build up is one real work of art, i like the dirty little sound that comes into the background occasionally kinda like a granny's bones shaking
Then the windy type of atmosphere in the build up shows that there may be a storm to come, and there is the bass hits hard its not too mixed up and it's not dull i think it's fine.. bare in mind I'm a noob as you already know lol
Overall IMO I think it has great potential +1

stinjee · Post by **stinjee** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 9:26 pm

roodbwoy wrote:http://soundcloud.com/sinus-sawtooth/si ... n-progress

any comment/feedback? I'm currently struggeling with the bassline, I think it's phat but I have this fear that it's too much I also think that it's boring but maybe thats because I've heard the track like a million times now since yesterday

big tune mate, like the bitcrushed top layer man, sick, not borin at all man

Sinus Sawtooth · Post by **Sinus Sawtooth** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 10:22 pm

cheers mates!

reignstep · Post by **reignstep** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 11:06 pm

roodbwoy wrote:http://soundcloud.com/sinus-sawtooth/si ... n-progress

any comment/feedback? I'm currently struggeling with the bassline, I think it's phat but I have this fear that it's too much I also think that it's boring but maybe thats because I've heard the track like a million times now since yesterday

The bassline is pretty good, filthy you did a good job. A bassline like that just asks for a heavy fucking banging kickdrum so thats what I kinda miss in this track, the kick and the snare need to be way heavier, it'll give extra power to the bassline (IMO)
Nice atmosphere in the song though it has lots of potential, and so far I really like it

I started this today, thought I'd try something Bar 9 style with the piano intro:
http://soundcloud.com/reignex/crashing-3

tell me what you think, there's still lots of work on this one ^^

mikeknight123 · Post by **mikeknight123** » Mon Aug 31, 2009 1:54 am

Reignz wrote: I started this today, thought I'd try something Bar 9 style with the piano intro:
http://soundcloud.com/reignex/crashing-3

tell me what you think, there's still lots of work on this one ^^

I like the piano intro its got a nice feel to it. 2 suggestions though from a complete amateur

- first i think the kick needs to be quite a bit louder in the mix and maybe a bit punchier. Also at the drop i think maybe layer the snare with a nice punchy one and have the hats a little louder maybe with a bit more movement.

I like the feel to it so far, with work it could be really nice!

bradicle · Post by **bradicle** » Mon Aug 31, 2009 6:19 am

Would like some feedback on something I started considering i'm pretty new to dubstep & Producing.

http://soundcloud.com/bradicle/bradicle-ambient

Here's another one that is also just started. Havn't really thought about doing anything more on it atm.

http://soundcloud.com/bradicle/bradicle-chainsaw

And.

http://soundcloud.com/bradicle/bradicle-4q

Keeping in mind a basically a complete noob

. So constructive criticism would be ace.

/edit. I realize I need to have a bit more variation but I'm still just learning

bradicle · Post by **bradicle** » Mon Aug 31, 2009 6:22 am

roodbwoy wrote:
I started this today, thought I'd try something Bar 9 style with the piano intro:
http://soundcloud.com/reignex/crashing-3

tell me what you think, there's still lots of work on this one ^^

Sounds pretty cool

. Is one of the keys out at about 6-8 seconds? Just sounds a bit funky.

archer · Post by **archer** » Mon Aug 31, 2009 1:28 pm

hey guys, I`m working on this tune and would like some feedback so I can add some more elements in it, suggestions are of course welcomed:) https://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1449566/Arc ... ersion.mp3

unwind · Post by **unwind** » Mon Aug 31, 2009 4:08 pm

http://soundcloud.com/twisted-soul-1

uploaded 4 of my productions today. one is finished, one is nearly finished, the other two are still in progress but the ideas are there. see what you think, and be honest if youre gonna say anything lol.

thanks

aspect-dubz · Post by **aspect-dubz** » Tue Sep 01, 2009 1:34 pm

would love some feedback on a new tune in production, it still needs mastering etc but it should come out good, THANKS

links in the sig, its the tune at the top

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