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zeder
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Post by zeder » Mon Aug 31, 2009 12:49 am

Psy:am ; RESIST_

Thanks!

Will work hard on new tunes

Cheers

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Post by gnome » Mon Aug 31, 2009 1:55 am

@ RESIST. I love the sound of the drums sound like an old worn radio. Maybe add more crack to that snare it sounds to much like your kick! And you have like a rimshot which would be cool with some delay I think. I'm loving your bass it has real progression and it seems that you drop oscillators throughout which works absolute wonders for it. Overall I digged the tune keep it up1 :P

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Post by dav.id » Mon Aug 31, 2009 8:41 am

Psy:am wrote:
Dav.id wrote:hey people, just finished this track today, my goal was to make is very dynamic and robotic, I used massive to create all the basslines, I splitted the bassline in three layers so I could give it alot more variation

It has a very robotic rolling sound to it, my inspiration for this track was Excision, Datsik - Boom

you can download it here:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/64702634c0baa711/

320 kb/s

I'm looking forward to here some feedback

If my english is fucked up it is because I'm dutch :D, so sorry for that hehe
banging bassline, can definitely see where you got your inspiration from. Ditto other peoples comments about ur lengthy intro though. I think it could do with a mini break and build up mid tune just to add another element. And turning the hats up wouldnt hurt! Really feeling this one though.
thanks i'm working on it :D

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Post by adzbro » Mon Aug 31, 2009 10:48 am

couple of new tunes
- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m7qwzmqKzQo
- (turns out 120bpm is pretty grimy innit) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ukTIUK9R ... re=channel :D

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Post by adzbro » Mon Aug 31, 2009 10:51 am

adzbro wrote:couple of new tunes
- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m7qwzmqKzQo
- (turns out 120bpm is pretty grimy innit) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ukTIUK9R ... re=channel :D
all the subs are gone from the end of the 2nd one, boo :(

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Post by dc_wolftown » Mon Aug 31, 2009 4:30 pm

Safe,
Heres a remix ive just finished for my mates band, mastered to perfection by DSF Legend Macc @ Subvert Mastering. I posted this in the dubs section a few days back completly forgetting this sticky was on here. Definatly agree with the lack of love for unknown producers, spose theres just so much stuff on there.
320 for your ears:

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=WG66XAX0

This is the first serious choon ive made pretty much. After a few months of pissing about making stuff not really knowing what i was doing i set myself a year aside last xmas to fully learn the ins and outs of programming. Ive still got another 4 months of full time fucking about until i start making loads of stuff. But i thought id take a few days out to do a remix for these guys, as they always churn out the goods at the place i do sound for and are proper safe peeps.
All feedback appreciated :)
Im in the zone with a new remix at the moment, but ill give loads of tracks on here an airing later and give some feedback (doubt theyll be much technical tips though as im still a relative noob).
Peace
DC_WT
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http://soundcloud.com/dc_wolftown/barry ... town-remix
Last edited by dc_wolftown on Mon Aug 31, 2009 10:23 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Post by unwind » Mon Aug 31, 2009 4:51 pm

http://soundcloud.com/twisted-soul-1

2 finished tracks are Behind the Smile and A Dramatic Turn of Events.
The 2nd one is not totally finished, im working on an ending at the moment but other than that everything is there. Any feedback is welcome just be honest :) thanks.

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Post by ogunslinger » Mon Aug 31, 2009 5:10 pm

Hey I changed some stuff, dropped the vocals and changed up the bass, can anyone give me some feedback on it?

you can listen to it at,

http://soundcloud.com/ogunslinger/day-n-night-remix-2

www.myspace.com/nazizombiebeats


Thanks

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Post by kezeg » Mon Aug 31, 2009 6:36 pm

soooo my first post on the forum...
i would like some feedback on a tune i made some time back

much appreciated

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6WGZdraDG64

sorry for the inadequate sound quality[/list]

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NEW TUNE WITH SUSPECT - GAME OVER

Post by panick » Mon Aug 31, 2009 7:17 pm

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1oZaKwX85fI

:D LET US KNOW WHAT YOU THINK? THIS TUNE IS SET TO BE BIG :wink:

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Re: NEW TUNE WITH SUSPECT - GAME OVER

Post by aspect-dubz » Mon Aug 31, 2009 8:22 pm

PANICK wrote:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1oZaKwX85fI

:D LET US KNOW WHAT YOU THINK? THIS TUNE IS SET TO BE BIG :wink:
BIG UP MAN, sick tune! getting released on prime im guessing?

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Post by dc_wolftown » Tue Sep 01, 2009 12:26 am

Kezeg wrote:soooo my first post on the forum...
i would like some feedback on a tune i made some time back

much appreciated

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6WGZdraDG64

sorry for the inadequate sound quality[/list]
Safe Kezeg,
Trust some twat on youtube to give it 1 star! Dont take it to heart mate seriously.
I love the strings dude, you got em sounding proper sweet. Only thing id say is beef the bass (the one that hits around 2mins) up abit, maybe layer the same patch over the original with some distortion of some kind) and replace the kick and snare with some more hard hitting samples so the beat really smacks you in the face (ive got a few beasts, PM me if you want a few i dont mind sharing the wealth :))
Other than that (which will probably take you about 10 minutes to do) its a winner mate, I reckon it could end up sounding proper Reso-ish. Keep churning out the choons!
Safe

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Post by dc_wolftown » Tue Sep 01, 2009 12:34 am

adzbro wrote:couple of new tunes
- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m7qwzmqKzQo
- (turns out 120bpm is pretty grimy innit) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ukTIUK9R ... re=channel :D
EOS is fucking filthy as man! Nice 808 sub layered on the kick aswell, not enough of that used IMO. Mebbe get your hands on glitch vst and fuck them beats up abit to go with the crazy ass bassline!
Yeah is good aswell man, never tire of that bass sound! Although drop a kick underneath the crash cymbel at 1.23! Maybe its just me who always has to do that mind... Fucking weird ass pic on the vid aswell haha

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Post by benh » Tue Sep 01, 2009 1:48 am

wud love some feedback on my new track! in the sig!<

safeeeee

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Post by saint.z » Tue Sep 01, 2009 6:35 am

No rest for the wicked.


heres one of the recent songs i did
it mixes dubstep and i guess trance?

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Post by adzbro » Tue Sep 01, 2009 12:19 pm

dc_wolftown wrote:]
EOS is fucking filthy as man! Nice 808 sub layered on the kick aswell, not enough of that used IMO. Mebbe get your hands on glitch vst and fuck them beats up abit to go with the crazy ass bassline!
Yeah is good aswell man, never tire of that bass sound! Although drop a kick underneath the crash cymbel at 1.23! Maybe its just me who always has to do that mind... Fucking weird ass pic on the vid aswell haha
cheers bro! your right about the crash cymbal.

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Post by stinjee » Tue Sep 01, 2009 4:33 pm

@ saint,

il be honest mate it all sounds a bit dry, need to get some effects on there man, reverb 4 sure, it also sounds muddy and quiet,
sorry to be harsh man thats just what i hear,

@ benh

Defo one fer the ladies, i like the bit near the end betta (around 4.20 mins) if u droped the keys here i reckon it would sound betta, sound a bit too much like pop music 4 my taste, but its well produced and still a good tune and id be proud of it.

@panick
big tune straight out man, nothing else to say props man,




got a beat iv bin working on 4 a bit, any comments will be well appreciated

its in the sig and its called "what i cant do"

SAAAFFFEEE

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Post by djwom » Tue Sep 01, 2009 5:58 pm

Opinions Please -

HIT ME!

http://soundcloud.com/wom/street-fight

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Post by potato-mob » Tue Sep 01, 2009 6:08 pm

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click the link n listen "the guide destroyer"

myspace.com/potatoakamob




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Post by azzaprodukshunzz » Wed Sep 02, 2009 12:24 am

Finished this piece a while ago but only got round to mixing and mastering.

Have a listen and let me know what you guys think. Any comments please as i am always looking on ways to improve my work.

Cheers

Monster.mp3 - 11.68MB

Myspace: A2RBEATS

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